Sorry, I know this was meant to be a pointless poem, but I totally loved it. It makes me laugh everytime I read it. It's just so funny. You might think you suck at poetry but I personally think you should write more for people's, like me for instance, entertainment. Thanks for listening!

that was halarious, i really injoyed it.

u really should make another one

"_"

*SCREAMS WITH LAFFTER!* OMFG THAT WAS SO EFFING HILARIOUS IT IS LIKE NOT EVEN FUNNY BUT THAT DIDNT MAKE SENSE BECAUSE REALLY IT DID THAT WAS GREAT I SHOULD TRY WRITING LATE AT NIGHT! THAT'S JUST BRILL! PURELY NONSENSICAL BRILL! (BRILLIANCE) OMG THAT WAS SO FUNNY, ITS LIKE NOT EVEN OH SHOOT NOW I'M REPEATING MYSELF EVERY PART OF THAT WAS I NEED PUNCTUATION WOW I ACTUALLY TYPED OUT PUNCTUATION THAT WAS SO HILAR!

seriously. rofl. rofl. forl. fofl. rorol.. roflolroflolrooflroflforl roof. kjfa;lksdjf so o fu nn y! really seriosuly! u have 2 add 2 da summary "but people think its awesome" so more people get 2 read it.

Oh God... I was totally cool with it up until the gay part... LOL!

And curse you! I'm at the library, so all my laughing is PUBLIC! Why are all these people staring at me? What? Have you never seen anyone rolling on the floor laughing before? Huh?

Brilliant, Lolly... Me loves it, of course.

im confused

Oh my God, that was HILARIOUS!

I haven't laughed so hard for ages.

Luckily I'm alone right now... I'm glad no one could hear me sniggering to myself.

But oh God, my cheeks are ACHING.

i

love

lauren.

well, sorta im not a homo like paul lol omg laurens got these hell cool red streaks in her hair and shes got these cross earring and she looks hell pretty...smart and pretty...so jealous gr lol anyways it was HELL good lauren u should show mrs khan or sumthing...althou she'd probably go spastic and like show the whole school at assembly like last time wif ur book ...lol anyways cya lata OH AND NEXT TIME in english sit on a table with me and jazz or sumthing cuz emma payne sux ass luv bron

Muahahhahahahha

Again, lmao! You hilarious! I think you should publish. Hahaha I would definitely buy your book of poems. :)

AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! WOW this is the first time I've had a chance to read this b/c my internet broke until now...

THAT was the funniest thing I have ever read! HAAHAAHAA I am laughing my ass off right now!

Now I have to go read flashlight...

Who said poetry was realistic?

I KNEW Father Dom was cannibalistic!

No! No! Poor Paulie's gay!

Demon fanfic writer, stay away, stay away!

Paul's a gay monkey, Ceecee has been fried,

Adam's disembowled, who else could have died?

*re-reads the last line* Oh dear god no...

The 1800's hottie? *sobs in her woe*

At least make him bisexual; save J-fans some pain,

I'll cease this review or I'll go insane!

Saz-the-sucky-ryhmer

wow...you went a little bit nuts then, huh? that's alright. the only thing that is NOT alright is the last line of this poem! lol, how could you, it's so evil! yeah, i'm reading this thing, and i'm like, this is great, it's the nuttiest thing ever written, and she wrote it on my birthday! but then you put in that bit about jesse being gay and i think my jaw bone is permanently wider. lol, i'm not a homophob or anything, i just really don't want jesse to be gay. oh, well, that just makes it nuttier. ok, so i'll go now...very...erm..nice. hehe..not. ames p.s. j/k on the whole "not" thing.

Lolly, you are one crazy thing

Go back to sleep now... go on..

Who knew you could write such awesome fics.. AND also write HILARIOUS, WEIRD, EROTIC, FREAKO poems? That was just so funny. Have you been taking your meds? You crack me up! ::Snickers::

-LaUrEn-

Lovely poem. I love the gay tattoo and the random farting- all very nice, I must say.

AU CONTRAIR! That poem made me laugh so hard! I loved it. Sometimes, people just need silly stuff like that, y'know?

Although, Paul w/ a sword is a frightening thing to think about. :)