one word . KAWAII ! *runsaround*

A gripping story!

awesome as always, yay for AxI fluff! woot!

cute then...

i hate seeing ole' Walter angry

but theres not much i can do

neway i still luv this story

I know you finished this but know now this story rocks... ... yeah...

Hmm, an interesting story for sure. But to think he'd go that feral without the seals...

this was a great story.

wow what happened to the origonaly person of whom integra was being replaced by seras.

but if you dismiss that like a fleeating though this was really really good.

YAYZERS! It's so cute! I especially liked the part where he was "unleashed" (whatever) and it's all...dark... Keep writing!

Toodles,

bobalina

Well, some of the narration I felt could have done with a little more building and smoothing... i.e., the "forgetting" about Quincy thing felt more like an "oops" than an actual significant step in the plot; the same with some of the scene transitions. Some of the character-interactions (physical) descriptions were a little awkward, but overall I do feel they conveyed what you were trying to say.

I feel that the story-line itself was well-thought-out and an interesting concept. Overall, the story was entertaining, and a good read that I'd recommend to an AxI fan - although I personally would like to see an epilogue where Integra does become a no-life King... But yeah...

So yup, there's my constructive feedback! Have a great one!

Hi! I loved the rest of your fanfiction! I was kinda sad to see it end so quickly. I'll continue on reading your fanfiction over and over again, though!

11-6-2005

Yes! I totally love your fanfic! I was trying to look for a friend's fanfic when your's caught my eye. I didn't see any harm in reading it, so I read. The next thing I know, I'm already on chapter 4! . So crazy. Actually, I was kinda wondering if Alucard served Integra because he loves her. I wasn't sure, but I stuck with it, anyway. I didn't tell anyone, but that was my opinion. My email's not real; it's the only way I could talk to you.

HAHAHAAHAHAH, dude your author note at the end cracked me up . But even if it was kinda weird I actually liked the sonnet!

That was...weird. Couldn't stop reading it though. It's quite facinating.

This is so weird. And Alucard is acting so weird too. Everyone is acting weird.