This is the last Raven/Malchior available for me to read besides the sequel to this one, so I hope I end up liking it...judging by the review count, its probably pretty good.

Just a thought: I don't think 'leer' means what you think it means.

leer
–verb (used without object)
1. to look with a sideways or oblique glance, esp. suggestive of lascivious interest or sly and malicious intention: *I can't concentrate with you leering at me.*
–noun
2. a lascivious or sly look.

And lascivious, by the way, means 'inclined to lustfulness; wanton; lewd.' Not really in character for Raven.

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this story is awsome but i if had u made anymore guys like raven it'll be all boring and mary sueish

I'd just like to say, this is a brilliant piece of work that I am quite surprised I have never come across before. I loved it, felt the plot was magnificent, and the writing (aside from spelling, which doesn't truly bug me in this story) was superb.

OH, MY GOD! I LOVE THIS! IT'S ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'D EVER READ!

NEVER DELATE IT!!

BYE~!!

Actually swearing isn't a sign of a poor intilect in of itself, it's the limited vocabulary of most who use such words frequently. If they could do it creativly such actions would tend to show a higher intilect.

Nice story thus far though. your portrayal of the cannon charactors was quite well done and your relative OC's wasn't terrible either, though i must admit i preferred malchior when he was darker. He made a better charactor foil that way.

To start off, your story is extreamly well written despite the fact that you seem to be starting from TT(TV) and switching almost compleatly into TT Comic series. As to your question about when the titans faced trigon in the comics versus the TV series 1: Raven was a good deal older in the comic than she is proposed to be at this moment. 2: in the TV series, which you seem to have abandoned anyways, the titans face trigon nearly a year and a half after the events in spellbound wheres your timeline sets the current chapter at around 5 to 6 months after spellbound.

Basically you don't need to worry about annoying timeline meshes as TT(TV) shouldn't even know about trigon yet.

Both Raven, and I would suspect, Rorek can generate lightning with a few words or gestures. Add to that Cyborg and his technical genious I could easily see them MAKING money off supplying the city with power.

Why do they try to find the slade by 'scurrying?' As far as I know, to scurry is what a mouse does. To SCRY is to look through a seeing glas, or something, to find someone, or something else.

Have you ever read any books by Patricia C. Wrede perchance?

great story

great story, but its beginning to disturb me how much youre plugging Nightwish. do you get £50 everytime you type the word? XD

oh my gosh! this is the BEST FIC EVA! I WILL NEVER BORE OF IT BECUZ IT IS SO GOOD! love it love it! and loved what you did with rorek and malchior! it seems as if you actually made teen titans! must fav

This is the most beautiful fanfic I have ever read. Alright, seeing since you finished the fic already, I wasn't sure if you'd read this, but my nerves were absolutely screaming at me to do so, and here it is. the story is awesome, obvious amount of effoprt put into it for your devoted readers *cue me waving and screaming* and I love it! Tell me when the sequel is up, because I can't seem to find it (if it is) and if it is, I BEG you to send an email to your unworthy reader to tell me what's the title so i can read it! Thank you thank youthank you oh-so-much!

Your number 1 fan
-Zoe nightshade