wow nice story but needs a bit of words and i mean MORE words o keep making and hi i'm kinami the critique so get to it

So sad...^^

Yeah, really depressing. But amazingly still good. Lol.

This is another great fic I have read by you and I am liking them so far. Great job.

InuNightWalker

oh noo Naruto had to Kill him didn't he?

hey i read your profile. :-)/ sad story

This is a very 'wow' moment. Your style is still impressive and the captured memory of the past is conveyed clearly yet vaugely at the same time, more emotions rather than visual imagery.
Beautiful job.

Wow. angsty. Very well written though. I'm looking forward to your future work.

aw...that's so touching ;_; *took it as SasuNaru* MY POOR NARU-CHAN!! WHY MUST YOU BE SO CRUEL SASURIN?!?! WHY?! *sobs overly dramatically and annoyingly loud*