Short, but sweet. Why isn't there more? I was interested.

I really like this. It's not often that Cosette is portrayed in a sympathetic, likeable light in fics so it's good to have a story like this. I like that you made Little Eponine so horrible and unlikeable too, she would no doubt have been ghastly towards poor Cosette. Very well written and sad, well done. :-)

Ok... Fantine was preganant when Tholomyes left her. I love your description of Marius.

I Love Marius!

Mah goodness... I am at a loss of words. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant fic.

"Besides,” she added venomously, speaking to Cosette, “I wanted that piece.”"

Excellent line, that.

Hello, The-Emma-Watson.

First of all, Rahel did *not* insult your story. She was constructively criticising it, which means that she was helping you improve it. And I must say, your fic does need improvement. (Most of mine do too.) But anyway, that is no excuse to call her what it looks like you called her. Good day.

-Rachael

Crap!Crap! Crap! You insulted my story of Hayley and if you wanna know you don't have to have sex to have a kid someone can HAVE ONE FOR YOU AND QUIT THE MODERN LANUAGE YOU *. gOOD BYE YOU LONDON *

Ohh, this was nice. I like the image of Cosette as a mother rocking the baby to sleep. The last dream was cute.

*shivers* How good! Ah, you rock.

She named her son Jean? *eye twitch as memories of Laura Kalpakian's literary trash attacks*

This is great. Yay for being good to Marius!

Hee hee. . .c'est très bien! There actually weren't that many mistakes, you know. It was no trouble. :D

Very nice. Poor Fantine. This story made me kind of sad, actually (because we all know what Fantine's fate is...). Keep up the good work :)

-Roxie aka Rachel

Fantine in her lavender 'roman' style dress - I don't know why but that image struck me

Lovely.

"...I am only going to dine with your father. He has promised me a surprise."

Oh...*sniffle* Poor, poor Fantine. And poor Cosette too, of course.

Beautiful! I especially like the description.

Ooh. You are splendid, mademoiselle.

I like it.

It's cool that your Cosette remembers something of Fantine.