If you had to cut the chapter short because of that scene then it shouldn't have really have been in the Mature section then. Not to be mean i promise but it kinda disappointed me and I understand that you wanted to abide by the rules but honestly it's in the MATURE section...isn't there supposed to be graphic stuff even if it isn't described in great detail?

Don't get me wrong, I

There are two things I would like to say about this story:

1: The style of writing was just...sheer beauty. I mean really, it's hard to come by this kind of writing (psh, I know I suck), so this seriously just made my day.

2: You so get extra props for using the word 'amaranthine', which is my most favorite word in the world, haha.

In short, lovely love.

.oblivion's pen

Ah lets hope hell has tons of yummy yaoi neh?

>.

(read the livejournal one)...was that REALLY your first lemon?
'cause let me tell you, it has been a LONG FREAKING time since ive read a lemon this drool worthy...

i love the pairing. i think the story is great and i hope to write my own of this pairing soon. great story Asurahime-dono!

I couldn't get the link to work... could you send it through as a reply to this review?

That's right! Don't let Sophia get in there! She sucks- I would join some sort of cult group that hates her but I'd rather post my feverent hate on a comment of a fanfic that I loved!

This is so sweet but has many dark parts- yes, Fayt belongs to Albel!

lovely. thats all i have to say about this. lovely

OMG! That fic is like ICYHOT! (inside joke, don't worry about it.) i was reading this in my computer class at school...even though I should be working... yeah right ...Anyways, you know how hard it is took keep people from reading over your shoulder when your in a public place? I absolutely adore this. Please wtite more one-shots! ~MotherSya

I love you. =D Great story. Did I mention that I love you? xD

=Moshi Moshi Mai=

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Wonderfully written :D

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD. i read the Cutscene and HOLY ERECTION BATMAN IT WAS AWSOME. It's some of the best writing i've read in a long time. I loved it. You should definately write more. i mean i'm in aw at how good it was. I am speachless, it was that good. *Grins* so yes i believe that you should continue writing stories like this. *Deep breath* you've made my day with this story, thats how great it was. So yes LOVE IT. THE BEST.

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SPIGET

I'll join the bandwagon! *hops on* Yep yep! Forever and ever! They make such a cute couple. ^-^ And it was very good. I enjoy it.