Nice story! It was an enjoyable read.

I just had a hard time picturing what was happening because the descriptions of the characters' physical stances didn't always flow. One second I think they're standing talking to each other, then the next sentence mentions them laying down. It just needs a couple of transition words to make the action of the story a bit more seamless. Does that makes sense?

Hey! I just wanted to thank you for this lovely piece of work! It was absolutely well written and I totally loved all your descriptions. I just discovered "Lost" a week ago and - as you can imagine - I am a real sucker for Jack/Kate interaction! :-)
So, thanks so much for this absolutely brilliant story. Your writing is amazing!

Take care,

Kat

I read your story yesterday and I love it! Even though I am a Jater turned Skater (hopefully you don't hold that against me) I love reading a good Jate fic every once in a while and this is definately my favorite so far! I am kinda confused though. Was the end part the beginning part too? Or were they two seperate instances where Jack and Kate were sitting together watching the sunset? Thanks! And I'm adding this to my favorites list!
Squinter :P

this was written very, very well. i really enjoyed reading it! keep up the good work!

Absolutely beautiful! I adored it! Going on My Favourites!

gorgeous! love your style.

beautiful and well writen

Ella

great story!

VERY good. I commend you. Fantastic characterization. Just fluffy enough! Well done!

I LOVED your story, and I am a fan of all your work. High Fidelity is fantastic. I believe I reviewed your work under the alias RoSePiiNK one time.
but one suggestion:
when you say "the intensity of the look in her eyes", all the prepositional phrases are a wee bit distracting. A better way might be the "the intense look in her eyes" or just "the insensity in her eyes" etc. etc.
but LOVELY work. absolutley wonderful. keep it up. You're all ready on my favorite authors list, so I look forward to reading more of your fanfics.

Cheers!

Very well written! I'd be interested to see your take on things in season 2...

is there going to be a second chapter?

This was brilliant! Absolutely fantastic! I can't think of anything I'd change with this! Well done!

Wonderfully written. Totally believable, both the plot and the characterisation. I really enjoyed your style, too. Nice job.

wow, i really like this story. definately one of my favorites out of the many jack/kate one-shots i've read! ^_^