oh my, I absolutely loved this story it has so much depth in the characters & the storyline kudos to your amazing writing! & now i'm off to see the sequel.

Just finished reading this, and I have to say I really did enjoy it. There were a couple of times where I thought a section could have been worded better, and the ending isn't quite what I was expecting (though rest assured I will be reading the sequel to this soon :-D) but overall this was very good.

You obvoiusly put a lot of thought into the Draconian people and their customs, achetecture etc. and also into Vira. I liked the way that you often included her thoughts in her sections, it really allowed me to understand her I think.

All in all, and excellent story, well worth the time spent reading it.

This is alright

It took me a good four to five days to completely finish. But in the end, it was totally worth it. This fiction is quite possibly one of the best FF8 fictions I've ever read and one of the best fictions on FF.Net that I've read also. Sure, I was looking for a Vira/Zell romance instead, but that's okay. I'm not disappointed! Now... if you'll excuse me, it's time for me to read the sequal!

A female Squall! I love it. And you invented a new weapon. Not easy to do, I know. I've tried. Good first chapter.

This is very sweeeeeeeet! Keep up the good work!

If any of your other fics are this good, then you're set!

I can't remember the last time i read this story...probably a year ago imagine my surprise when i find it again and it's finshed! truely amazing great story and now your gonna make me wait even longer that is so mean! :)

Excellent story! Can't wait for a sequel.

Well, I can safely say I wasn't expecting that surprise punch at the end there. Great story!

This is really really good so far. I will keep reading as soon as I finish reviewing.

I think this story is really cool#I read all othe chapters.And I can't wait any longer.PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,write more chapters.Keep up the good work.

This...story...RULES!

You should write a sequal when youre done with this!

This is GREAT! Keep up the good work! You rule!

Hey I really love this so far. I'm going to go back and read it again tomorrow. It's 12:30am and my daughter has the chicken pox! (Darn the pox!) I think I'm just looking at the computer blankly right now! Must get sleep. But, again, I really liked it so far...Hurry with the next chapter.

No matter how much I read this story, it still amazes me. I kinda liked this chapter, and found it interesting. Well, I hope the next chapters come out real soon, because this is getting real good.