Amazing... I just did a summary search for fics on Nidoran and found this and *then* looked at the author and saw LemurKat. "No way," I said to myself, but... yes way indeed. TOTALLY random! I still check back on your lumurkat_studio lj to see if you've updated that...

Aww this was refreshingly unique! I adore Pokemon culture stories, but Pokemon folklore... that's an entirely new level! I loved them both. The first one was cute and amusing whereas the second was kind of dark and scary. Lovely contrast. .

Verah goot! I'll have to check out the others tomorrow when I'm not falling asleep. And don't be afraid to let me know when you continue Kataryna's story. :P

i love..i mean that.lol.

that storie rocked!

you are my fav author.you rock!

Interesting idea, creating folklore for Pokémon. The first one was good, though the skeleton-persians seemed a little off (what the heck were they doing there, anyway?) The second one was, although good, a little too much of a ghost-story and not enough folkloric. Well, you live as you learn, as we say over here.

The first story was very sweet, and original. The only reprimand I have is that you have one line where you focus on the ones listening to the story. It would be better, once you had done something like that, that you do it again, or leave it out. Maybe you could put in at the beginning how the group of 'Mon sat down to their stroytime.

The second story was _VERY GOOD_. It was GREAT. I am terrified out of my little mind. And also sad... Very emotional, yet it stays in the story telling style, which is generally not too emotional. Here, the insertion at the end of the story being told to some other people works better, but there should still be a little more context for that. Anyway, say, "Woohoo!" and give yourself a donut! :) PS, Magumarashi's evolved form is Bagufuun.

This is kewl! I love it!

Very creative! There are quite a few noticable typos in this, however. Try running your things through a spell-checker before posting them; it helps more than you'd think. Other than that, I like!