Another short, but sweet story. Keep 'em coming

Rather short, isn't it?

Do you think you can make a Hamtaro meets Totally Spies Fic that would be cool you and Sam make a cute couple.

-jd

Ending was good. Could use a little more suspense. Something like the kidnapper capturing one of you and holding the others at bay, by threatening the captured individual. Then you can work out the rescue of the captured person, and the athletes. Not a criticism, just an idea.

Hey, Mat. An excellent mission. Short, mind you, but very realistic. Unfortunately, my knowledge of Brittney is limited to her appearance on "Alex Quits", so I can't say much about your portrayal of her, but otherwise very nicely done! Bryan

That's short but sweet

The story looks good! Happy to see a mission in it, and a nice teaser for the next chapter! Please continue, you're doing great!

Quite good, and with more attention to detail. But that whole ting on Lance Armstrong was unessecary. The cliffhanger at the end was great.

Man this a great story, hope you'll continue soon

Good job. Like usual with your work, it feels a bit too technical, like an instruction manual. Take time to describe you surroundings.