The story is adorable. I never would have guessed Hoggle to be the one to bring them together. I really like the humor in here (the title for one, even though it turns out to be sweet in the end), but also the part in the first chapter about how messy the throne room was. The idea of having Jareth sick to bring him and Sarah together was original, especially with her not wanting to at first. The only thing I have to say is that I would have liked more description. For instance, in the last chapter it would have been funny to see how they would tease Hoggle when he lost his voice. The transition between that and the wedding was a little quick. Also, on a grammar note, when a different character speaks, that character should have his/her own paragraph. Overall this was a cute story.

This was great and so sweet, I've been checking out a lot of your writing lately, but have been too lazy to review...sorry_; but I will say that everything I have seen, all of it falling under Labyrinthn_n was absolutely fantastic and I'm putting you on my faves list...you have a real talent and awesome ideas.

Oh... *fans eyes* I love it! Great Job!

I would protest due to his obvious laryngitis... excpet it was potion induced so Sarah is fine. I digress.

*claps* another great chapter... I'm really lovin' this so far!
From one who *hates* doling out comments on every chapter..

A very excellent first chapter. I really like it! I realize that I'm a little late in the game on this whole Labyrinth thingy, but hey, better late than never! A friend's father is currently looking for their copy so I can actually watch it in its entirety... I love the story so far!

Very sweet story.

Awwwwwww...that was so cute! :) I liked that once very much, *claps* excellent job my dear!

Great! Me Like, Me Like!

ooooooooooooo. how sweet.

:) Very cute

hehe, very sweet

*snifs and cries all happily*

YAY!MAKE SEQEUL!ME LIKE STORY!OOHH OHH!(pants like a monky then turns into a human again)Sorry..i get a little primal but anyways great story!Ohh...bananna!

ahh I love it. I do have to admit though, Hoggle haveing that much bravery is not all that surprising, if he thought he could get away with something he always did do it.