Hay,I am not much on reviews but I really like this. I know how it feels. It's a sweet misery. It's hard to put in words becuse you don't know where that will lead. Hopefully to paradise. But once in a while to a dark place.

I love reptitiveness in poetry; it's what I thrive on: repeated verses, stanzas . . .the whole lot. There's a wonderful running theme thruoght this poem of rejected and unknown love. This is the kind of love that hurts the most. I'm not talking about love that my sister frivolously calls so, because that isn't love at all.It's pettty childishness, not covered up. When you think about it however, love is always childish. There are degrees of childishness in it, too. The kind of love that makes you think of loyalty,closeness, and eternity makes for something less childish than a crush of younger years.To tell you the truth, I've never liked love or undying affection. I hate writing about it most of all. It's like writing about something frivolous, a feeling that's only temporary. You can only feel so much love. I like, however, the sadness in love, and how it's bitter sweet. The things I love most in life are things I hate and love at the same time. I think, even if unconsciencely, other people do as well. There is nothing more gratifying then writing a long entry in a journal after being so sad that you feel that your very soul is tearing apart, because it makes you more human, more alive. Get what I mean? Have I scared you completely? ;;

GREAT POEM IT HAD A LOT OF HEART AND I REALLY FELT YOUR EMOTION.*

Hmm, kinda dark and a little saddening. Whoever it's about should know.

::sniff sniff and huggles Anna:: Its so beautifuuuuuuul! Wahaha ::giggles:: I like it! It dragged a tear to my eye!

again amazing. I'm your biggest fan!

that was good...not bad at all! I just wonder who the two people are?

VERYYY NICE!

Eeek. Sorry for putting this under fanfiction poetry. It's a mistake on my part. ;; Anyway, I think this is one of your best poems. You get better everytime you write them.