Last time I gave you a dollar's worth, I know. But I don't work right now and am broke, so sixty three cents and some pocket lint will have to cut it.

...I think I'm gonna have to plagiarize this for my next creative lit assignment or something. This chapter is money. Shit, I wish I wrote this. Then I wouldn't have bum money off my parents for rent.

So Elena is a traitor, huh? That bitch. Seems like this finally has a bit of plot.

It does have a plot, right?

Glad I could help you, however I did it. Made me smile to see my pen name up there at the top of one of your stories.

Keep writing. I know I will.

I'd almost forgotten how much chaotic fun the corps of Shinra could be, until SB reminded me forcibly, wonderfully, and humourously of that fact. Your Reno's at the top of his game -the tank fight is awesome and his leap into the elevator is even better.

You have this awesome knack for making the Turks and the Shinra elite complex and humourous at once; they are dryly, wonderfully sarcastic and dangerous without any loss of any of their darker side or power - under your pen, these are people who Run The World and know that fact very, very well. As they should, really. ^^

In short, this rocks, and I'm even more guilty about not quite upholding my side of the bargain now. But - my last midterm's tomorrow so it should be up then.

~S.

i love this story. please update it.PLEASE

"You remind me vaguely of a big, homoerotic bear, and I now have the urge to go play in the morning rush hour.” Ah, that's a choice line. Just another fun day in the Shinra building. Hilarious. Keep writing, dude.

Hey, I really liked the new chapter! I enjoyed the humor in this one too, and I'm pretty intrigued as to what Tseng's mother and the concept of Rude needing someone will add to the storyline. Looking forward to the next one.

Hahaha excellent! Love it

Sweet! I love this fic and can't wait until updates...

Heh, I love the Turks and Ruffie-kun...and you actually make me like Scarlet for once!

Nice fic, keep it up!

Like I said, giggling and snickering x 5+ is a very good sign. I only saw one problem with this chapter, but it may very well be blamed on the fact that I have not only natural blonde highlights but blonde highlights from the salon. At the end, after Reno dented Scarlet's car... my mind didn't really jump from one scene to the next. I was a bit confused and had to read it a couple times. *shrug* But it was golden, dahling, golden!

I'm glad to see that you explained why Reno acts kind of skitso. Not a bad thing; it's really the meat in the storyline. But you know that, don' you? I really have to say that I'm enjoying Tseng talking about Rufus being "such a nice guy", etc... but that's just 'cause I'm a sick girl. Sigh.

Omg, you fucking rock. I'm so glad I finally decided to get around to finishing the first chapter - I'm lazy, I can't help it. But I'm very excited and will continue.

...dear God, that last line was so golden.

And no, I have no "constructive criticism" to give you because it's excellent. Whe. Onward!

Ah, I love all the chicks in this. But I love Rude too. A different perspective--refreshing. And of course there's Reno. I can't leave him out. There are a lot of awesome one-liners in here. Great story, and I needed the laugh. Thanks for sharing. Please continue!

Ding!

i like.

Heh i really love how u make all of ShinRa so loveable keep this up cuz its rules.

Nice job dude, this is great.

... MORE!!..

...seems everyone has their two cents to add.
Arright. So, chapter four with Reno in the hopital made me laugh. Very hard.
... Which is making me fein for chapter six, asshole. >(
Pool party was definitly a nice chapter also, and I Can't say it was anything short of 'fun'.
I'm done. That's like... a dollar.