This was awesome, I love it

Dude, most awesome!
I totally loved the French references (I took three years, so I got all excited when I saw something recognizable)
Also, much kudos for matching the style and inadvertently putting in a CT quote. That is when you know you are a true nerd. :D
You have added to the redemptive status of humanity at large (or really just the writers on as my opinion of them has been low as of late.
The randomness is most inspiring.
-Sink Me! Quoth the Puce Pimpernel @-$--

LOL, this is great! I love the fact that of all video games, you chose Pong, the most simplistic of all, to make a complex poem about. Very clever!

This is great, but who would write about two sticks hitting a ball?!

Incredible! :)

...you sensed magus in gauche's dialogue? *looks* oh... when he says "if my fate is to die, blah blah blah..." oh yeah.. i forgot that magus said that. that quote was somewhere in the back of my head when i was writing the story, and i thought it sounded good in the dialogue. i dunno. but i didn't realize that i was stealing a quote from chrono trigger XD

Hmm.. was that a bit of "Magus" that I sensed in the Gauche? Heh, in any case, that was brilliant. It captured Homer's style (or translations of his writing into English anyway) well, and it's great how you replaced the gods with the Atari. Great work.

I have been reading Iliad, and I thought you did a surprising job of capturing the tone and rhythm of it. I also though it was pretty funny.

Good art is never appreciated in its own time. Why on earth does this fic only have two reviews?
Seriously, though, that was thorougly amusing. The overblown bombast was spot-on, and made me laugh out loud, because, of course, it was about Pong. Wonderfully absurd.

Nicely done...you manage to encompass the beauty that is PONG. Nice reference to the Iliad. An epic poem for a classic game.

Most Impressive! I loved every bit of it. The dialog shared between the two warriors was inspiring. The way you described the world of pong was excellent. I also enjoyed the twist at the end.

~Viewtiful!~