hey... i hope you can update soon... your story is cute... please update soon!

...this is the second time in maybe half-a-dozen fics that I've seen a kumquat referenced in a L/J story. Still, that doesn't mean I didn't found this enjoyable, because I did. I like Lily refusing James' request even before he asked, and I like the way the other boys bet on the incident. Any chance that it will be continued?

He he he!Funny funny story! Update you lazy bum! Teehee!

BZ...

'Twas funny - yes it was. *grin*

Oh my goodness! I am so very sorry it took me this long to respond, because I am very, very bad with that. About the story (if you remember still...after all this time) you can continue..I actually would of given you the okay a few weeks ago, except that my friend went on an impromtu trip to Florida for her b-day, and I couldn't contact her there. If you still want to, you can. So, I hope to see it completed some day, good luck with that.

As well, really good story you've got going there, I really like it! :)

Very good. Quite compelling! Very good story if I do say so myself.

Hey! omg i really like this story! lol its funny and i like the conversations! Well please update whenever you can, i cant wait to read more!

Good Job! :D

ALRIGHT LUNA! This was very good and yes...*ahem* Very good. Man I'm hungry...I really am...ANYWAYS! I was so :O when I got an email saying u started another fic! COOLIO! Keep it up..This is gettin' good:D

I have one simple word for you...well i guess with these its more... well you knwo what i mean.. at leats i hope you do.. oh whatever!

UPDATE!

lol and I just read that over and realised I put GOF instead of GFT, which further proves I have lost my mind and my memory is going..another syptom of insanity which I sadly suffer from. lol Damn! I always mix them up! [admin@ -edit: we warned you didn't we?]

ahah! You updated it! hehe thats another one for the list, I love you nonsence fics too! but whats so cool is that its a nonsence fic but the nonsence makes alot of sence! Even know the sence is a little confusing which makes it somewhat nonsence it does make sence!... ahem ... yeah, anyways.. Awesome work! And update part 2 soon! lol I'm so happy you posted part 1, but that means I have to post that first chapter im working on soon...or you know..a little later perhaps.. eheh -_-' it's..sorta..almost done. Oh well at least now in second cup I'll ask you how your GOF chapter is going and you can go "hows your chapter going?" eheh my turn to squirm eh? I guess it's only fair since you already have enough to squirm about, most of that due to the unfamous "camio boy", which I have reason to belive LIKES YOU. Okay..wow I'm watching that little blue scroll-bar get longer and longer thinking - this is a longer review then I usually write..humm I wonder how long I can make this review go? Does fanfiction have a point where they just have to cut off the reviewers review? Because think about it, what if some really bored person came along and wrote like a forty page review? Is that possible? Whoever can do that would have to sit down and just keep talking and talking and talking...wouldn't that be annoying cause they would be rambling about nothing at all but the time the forty pages were up, asking you question after question stalling for time huh? I mean who does that! I bet they would be some random psyco. Like I can just picture it now, some crazy idiot talking and talking..some freak who is just being wierd or all around annoying, they probably wouldn't have a life...yah know the kinda person who is still in there pj's at 2pm sitting in some whacked-out basement...wierd fuzzy hair..probably short (cause all crazy people are, unless you ARE crazy and your really tall) You know that kinda wierdo... But I mean what are the odds of meeting someone who fits that exact description? Probably like a million to one! And if you were like friends with them? I mean that would be a long shot. But hey! I'll keep my eye out for someone like that. Now those are the kinda people that should be in a mental hopital...there is definitly a screw missing in that messed up puddle they have for a brain. But moving on...yeah...so I'll talk to you soon, In fact i'll see you tommorow at school. Like usual. I even think we have the anime club..oh wait no...isn't it the "bento kon?"..or maybe thats the other anime club..I dunno...Or maybe just mayb- [admin@ -edit: we have cut off this review due to the impratical size of the comment on this story. We suggest you make new friends befor you are scarred any futher]