o_O C-ripes! I'd put you on par with Edgar Allen Poe with how morbid this is. Very well written, though.

nice! are you going to do any others, i hope so! they are very good! :)

wowW o_O Like this one! The Sweet Smell of Champagne. I felt like read Edgar Allan Poe. Nicely done.

Holy crap.

That was awesome. o_o Oh my god. That was so...Grimm's Fairy-Tale-esque. That was so beautiful, so grotesque, SUCH AN AWESOME ENDING oh my god. XD You've totally blown me away! Oh my god!

I only read this chapter but MAN do you have some talent. There were chills running up my spine and everything -- this could be a stand-alone piece. xD That was so cool. So very Halloween-y for lack of a better adjective.

Keep writing!

--Mynx

I really like the Princess and the Pea one. Very interesting and different take on the story.