I like how you show us a different side of Manny, and how she isn't that innocent. This is really good.

phonomenal absolutely fantastic

I effing love you, Aubrey. You write so deliciously in first person and it makes me feel inferior. Damn third person being my security blanket. Heh, like Marco. Anywho, I love you. I love Cranny. I love Manny. I love whores. This story is jesus. Mwah.

Whoa... Amazing. A very good insight to Manny without coupling her with someone. Great job.

...Wow. I hate you. And by that I mean I hate myself, for, you know, being completely inferior to your unreal mastery of human emotions. Fictional television show it may be, you still have this incredible ability to watch these characters and make the kind of connections that separate true writers from amateurs. Your insight is delicious, and of course it's that signature pacing and exquisite vocabulary of yours that makes me want to eat it all up. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant.