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Kyuubi-Sama
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
This works really well as a one shot. As a full blown story, not so so much simply because it's been done before...a lot. But as a one shot it's GREAT!
Zelda&Link4eva
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
I love this story and the 2 after it! You should definitly make a forth one! No offense, but you should also add a couple chapters to the forth one... Like I said; this is one of my favorite stories! YOU ARE AWESOME!
Sir Trib The Bold
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
Nicely done, I hope you do continue to write other chapters. With the way you set this up, with both ninjas and civilians taking sides, you could easily turn this into an interesting civil war story between those who know Naruto and believe in him, and those who let thier fear and hatred blind them.
Kootonii Akatsuka
2007-08-22 . chapter 1
*Squee!* KAWAII! I LOVED IT!
Happy Birthday Naruto-kun!
herosusan
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
some words were mispelled but this was a great story!
wordlessilence
2006-11-17 . chapter 1
good stuff man!
FinalKingz
2006-10-18 . chapter 1
ahh... what... the... very nice... I like your first part
Tragic warrior
2006-10-14 . chapter 1
Poor Naruto. Damn the villagers to hell, where they will burn for all eternity. At least it was a happy ending for Naruto and Sakura, maybe not so much for Sasuke and Kakashi when Sakura gets her hands on him. You should have made the story a tragedy or angst but that's just my opinion. Good story.
The PhantomHokage
2006-03-30 . chapter 1
Great story please keep writing Naruto stories
Tsuna Dragon
2006-03-20 . chapter 1
awe that was wonderful! Keep up the great work
Midnight Promise
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this story and it was well written.

But "You little **" just didnt seem right and you might want to use something else in the future. (shrugs)

It was actually pretty good and I liked the it a lot. Lol! I want that picture!

Please do more.

^_^

InuNightWalker
NinMcN
2006-02-17 . chapter 1
Nice!! I cried reading this!
Anime ADHD
2005-11-14 . chapter 1
Aw, i luved it! Great job!! hehehe!! Awesome!!
Tama Saga
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
This is very interesting. I liked the action, although I kinda hoped that Naruto had helped out.
SeikoTuNeR
2005-02-12 . chapter 1
Even though I really doubt the whole village would do that, it was a nice touch. Everyone coming to help.. got one of those warm fuzzy feelings. And eez, crazy fanatic mobs. Later!
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