so dramatic'snif'i love these kind of'snif'fictions do more please'snif'

reminds me of a perosn and i bad memorys... awesome fanfictoin no to short, good spaced, not to long you kept it intresting!

A TRUE COMPLIMENT.
11/10

Samelia

that was so sad, I almost cried. But Leland was very firm and stood his ground, which shows power. And btw, are you sure his name was "Leland"? because I've been striving to find his name to put in my creations.

Oh, my god!

How sad.

ur story was pretty cool ya know. i really liked it! it's as if it was a missing piece of the movie. totally tear-jerking

Oh poor Sarah.
*gives Sarah a tight hug*
Your story actually made tears start to come in my eyes. But I love it anyway. Thanks. :)

-Janna Hawkins

*hours length of silence* Man...that was so real I almost wanted to break down and start sobbing in front of my computer...

Excellent writing thought and ver, very, VERY effective too!

Simple and affective I throughly enjoyed. I think you really captured what happened that night when Leland left Great Job!