that was extremely great!i enjoyed it emensally(?).

How cute!

OMG!Very nice indeed! Loved it, your writing style is superb!

keep going please!!

That was a truly wonderful example of good fan fiction there were some rough spots and even some parts that i didn't like(I'm to tired to point them out) but on a whole i genuinely enjoyed it and i "simply" loved how you mixed the title in end making sure every one with half a brain got the connection but anyway i loved the story keep writing.

Aw such an adorable little fic I stumbled upon!
Its beautiful! I was able to laugh and cry and smile along with them! =] You're very talented.
I've read all of your work =] They're all wonderful!

aww please continue!

aw, lovely :)

another lovely chapter

LOVELY!

Wonderful ending! Very happy and sappy and jsut the wasy it should be. So, great job and all that. Good luck with future writings!

Great story! update soon!

OMG WAAHH I LOVED YOUR STORY!! It was like reading it out of a book.. ^_^ it kept me interested, and I almost cried in that scene where James was thinking to himself about Lily's harsh words.. and when Lily thought about all the times James had been hurt by what she had saidd.. whe, yer so talented!! :D but please, keep up the good work!! I would like to continue reading your stories!

-OH, by the way, your story sparked my obsession with JamesxLily

keep up the excellent work and please update this fanfic soon please...if it's not completed yet please many thanks ttyl

this is really good! aww poor james! any ay I don't really mind where the story ends at the moment but... KEEP WRITING!