weird...

Now that I've decided to read and review every Silent Hill story I haven't already seen...
I wonder why you didn't continue this? I suppose it's been so long since you posted, I may as well give up hope of a second chapter.
I think people do find your story intimidating, as it looks like a block of continous text...not half as bad as some I've seen, though. There's no problem with the actual content. You might try to put in a better transition between "Please don't leave me here" and when Tara awakens. I like the plot, and though it does seem basic compared to some stories I've seen, basic but well-written is better than...an elaborate front that has no substance.
You're good at catching the reader's attention. The quick pace is intriguing, and I assume you'd go into more detail as the plot progressed. It's a shame you didn't write any more, I really would've liked to see how this turned out...

Hey, HL. Just me. You said that you would like it if I reviewed (sorta) and I guess I am. I've read your unupdated stories over and over and still have no idea what the fanfic is about. I'm writing this at school and I really want you to email me. I'll be able to check it at any time during school hours. Probably at home if I'm careful. It's Monday, Paul will be bringing the letter I have for you to tonight's meeting. I'll talk to you whenver I can and I think that might be in a few days. Anyway, I have to get back to class. I'll review with more info again. It'll be on either one of your fics, and I'll try to email you at Ginifer's house this weekend. My email is so have fun.

Miss you lots-HLS

Hey, Hybrid Lotus! How's life going? Apparently not so good. I just wanted to say hi and you probably know who I am. If you can't think in the very depths of your mind for whatever reason, then: THE B- TREE is in YOUR PANTS! Okay, needed to get that out of my system. I also wanted to say that you rule and that you write beautifully. I hope to see you writing more in the near future. And as we cannot keep in touch, I want to say goodbye again for now, and have a happier life than the one you're having, you always have me behind you! :)

Nice twist. The girl is hysterical and doesn't know how she got from an asylum to a house. I'd say to leave the story as is. It's the simplest plot to the town of silent hill. Two people who don't know each other meet in a drak alley, one has a nightmare while the other weilds a gun, they set out into the unkown. (Sorry. Sometimes I get a littl bit carried away.)

Please continue. Are you going to continue? I like it much! _

That was cool! Are you going to continue it? I hope so!

I found your story rather intriquing, despite the fact that, from an obvious conclusion, it begins as a classic amnesia story. Amnesia stories can, however, perk your curiousity. What, oh, what happened? Did Tara do a couple tablets too many on the acid intake? Did she get stoned and run in to the wall? If so, did her parents take a hit, put down the bong, and say, "Awe"? No one knows, which is why you should post the next four chapters. Weird how I was on the phone with you while typing this, but hey. Talking takes effort, so piss on that.

I liked this! Are you going to continue it? I just love fics like this, because I just know Harry and co. weren't the only people alive in Silent Hill! So, please continue. I am curious about Tara and all the confusing stuff surrounding her.

Great job! I look foward to more.

What the hell...?

Ahhh, interesting beginng! _ Please double space paragraphs? It's a little hard on the eyes to read it like this... also... more details between dilogue? _ I love Silent Hill, and I'd like to read more, if you intend to continue!