ok so im confused i want to noe how hes gonna make yuki ohappy i noe shuichi will eventually be happie he always bounces back but yuki? anyways great story

Woah... this is so ambiguous. (II) I loved it. (^^)

Beautifully twisted. That's all I can say.

Well that wasn't what i was expecting but it was very good all the same. Toham's POV fitted him perfect, their didn't seem to be any OOC in there at all (far as i could tell) and the 'god' idea was a perspective i hadn't thought of before too much. Everyone was really well played and i've got no criticisms over your writing.

very nicely written. Thank you for writing it. It was very great...and my poor Shu-chan again *huggles him* Everything bad happens to him

E.. I despise Tohma even more now.
I just caught up on reading your fics this morning... and this one really turned my head.

You hit the relationship between Tohma and Yuki well. The way Tohma manupulates Yuki.. makes Yuki become dependent on his comfort. It isn't real love for Eiri... it's dependence. And Tohma is.. freaking scary.

You show Tohma's obsession towards Yuki clearly.. as well as his hatred for Shuichi.
He blames Shuichi for causing pain.. but, at the same time, doesn't Tohma cause pain from his manupulations. But like all mental cases, he's blind to his own faults and in his godlike way.. only sees the pain others cause.

The Ryuichi and Tohma conversation was nce as well. Shows that Ryuichi, in his own way, is just like Tohma. So, in the end, is this what being powerful means? Becoming god? Getting +what you want.. doesn't matter if it's not what the other person really wants.. as long as you get your heart's desire.

Okay, enough with my anal way of analyzing the hell out of stuff. Well done!

whoa! oh so evil ryu-chan and tohma! ahaha! this is nice! its over, ne? that was really good!