omg omg omg that was so amazing plz plz plz plz plz update this its so god!

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I love it! hope you write more

'EL Profeta' means 'The Prophet'. 'Profesías' means 'Prophecies'. I like your story, but you should leave spaces between dialogues. Update soon.

loved your story so far! so good! though try for longer chapter and try to double space things. Other than that your story is EXCELLENT!! Can't wait to read the next chapter

SBH

that stroy is SO AWSAME! you HAVE TO WRITE A NEW CHAPTER!

Great story

hey that was realy good.
i so can not wait for more.
well, you have been updating fast!
that's great.
CYa

Nice
Please Update SOON
:o)

wow.. the story is really good! i like it!

write more soon good story.

that was really good.
yay! and update.
please update again soon.
CYA

Nice
:)
update SOON

I love your story so far. I've read many FF stories about rescuing Surius from the Veil, and so far your's is the best. Please update soon!!

I love this story please write more soon.

you finaiiy updatet.