well, it might be depressing but it's damn great and, by the way, perfectly believable. kudos

Vegeta, leave the hoe-bag and come to me!

Wow. With somebody with as much pride as Vegeta, I can definetely imagine him acting the way he did. Nice work!

very good fic, a sequel would be very good so you could se how everyone handles it and so on. definatly one of best i have read here .

i enjoyed it. reading this compaired to your other fics. its a lot different.but its not bad, most one-shot's are all get to gethers with OOC, this has a little but its very well written and, i have to say hands down, the best one-shot i've read.

From what you say, that you dont like these stories, you did a great job for hating them

that was... wel, cute in a way (okay, i know i'm weird xD)

so full of emotions, i really like it :D

I really enjoyed it. Your writing is very good.

Heartwrenching.

YAY! So CUTE!

I just love this story. I always wanted him to act like that, to change his character. One of my favourite fics without a doubt. Could you write another BV :D?

Best wishes,

Milly

It's been so long since I've read a Bulma/Vegeta fic. I've aloud myself to get sucked into the Harry Potter phenomenon-hopefully I'll start writing on this SN again soon. Anyway, as I said, it's been so long and it's so nice to come back to such a well-written fic. And not OOC really, considering how long Bulma and Vegeta have been together.

I absolutely loved this part (so well-written, it gave me pause): "I don't know what to do." He says softly after a while, "You've confused me deeply." A sigh and then he continues, leting himself speak freely as I taught him to many years before. "I still love you." He forces out in a choked voice, surprising me with his choice of words.

Great job! I'll be looking for more of your work in the future.

Marci

i have to say first of all that your concept is good. the story was a touching one but vegeta is too ooc. the real vegeta would have killed yamcha and made bulma watch. He would make her pay for her betrayal and he would have suffered all the more for being hard headed

wah! this made me cry..I loved it though! I will reccomend it to anyone who asks!

It was good-I dont what happened-but it was written wonderfully. At least you didn't make him hate her or something. Besides nobody's perfect and this is probably the only B/V fic I've read that could actually happen in this messed up world we live in. Anyway I enjoyed it-Princesa

the fact that you dont like this fic speaks wonders of your skill as a wrighter. it shows that you can put emotion into anything even if you dont like the topic. thats a rare skill.

this story manages to highlight a fact that everyone else seems to forget sometimes. Bulma is only human (relitivly speaking) and as such makes mistakes. and as for Vegeta...well, he cried in the series when his body was broken and dying, so why not when his freshly thawed heart was?