Wow, so powerful... this is awesome, so well-written, and great pov!

WOW. That's really the only word for this fabulousness. Wow.

That was very beautiful! I loved it, is there gonna be more?

Whoa. Cool.

Very intense. Can't wait for more

Good so far!
I updated my They Had It Comin story today if you wanna check it out.

Please update this soon!
Rock on!
From,
Lucky Eponine04

Wow, that was cool! All haunting and, like, cool! I liked the last bit, the 'barrel of my sister's gun' bit. This was really good!

I may be a lowlife, but I'm not quite scum. ;) Apology accepted. And I'm sorry for being incredibly annoyed at you afterwards. Can't wait for the update! *pokes with spatula* Write, Viv, write!

WOW! This is brilliant Viv! Love the style and format, everything!!

india

Wow, this is really good. I'm not usually a fan of poems, but this one is fantastic. It's interesting how you told it from Veronica's point of view. Please write more!! :)

WOW, Viv. That was amazing. I love your poetic style. I also enjoyed getting such a detailed inside look at Veronica's POV. I'll end this review the way I started it. WOW!

Oh my god!
That was so deep and dark and...
OH MY GOD!
I want to cry!
Keep going hun!
LOVE IT!

~KELSEY~

Wow. The Great Viv is a poet as well. Great chapter! I'm assuming that this will be continued, which is why I'm telling you to UPDATE!
-Rachael