Wow Spider is kind of have a feeling for Aile!

Wow now I know... *Surprised* Please keep it up!

Ok, I'm hooked! Nice reveal on the playing cards, and his attitude and personality, and how you linked Axl, Spider, and Redips (I still can't believe I didn't see that one coming in the game!)

Yay, I’m back and the pills are working XD. Before I read the second part, which you just updated, it is only natural to read the first. Ok, I have not played CM yet, but I have a good idea of the plot and the characters. (Nasty spoilers...). The fic has a decent plot, really funny moments (Sigma in bunnysuit, this is creepy in a delightfully disturbing way) and the characters stay... in character XD. You dare name the city Omega? Omega’s screws must be tossing in the underground lab... Actually the joke’s on you; Omega is another Greek letter. Anyway, I’ll start reading the second part right away. Since we have a 9 hours time zone difference, you must be seeing another review alert by the time you check. Um, enough ranting?? For now anyways.

hey it me again, i hope my review works this time. I really love this idea of having a real spider in this story. Well i can't wait to read the next fic from u very soon

later

*laughs* i nearly cried IN CLASS when you put that playgirl bunny suit in there! oh man... good time... good time...

Hmm...I don't read much fanfiction, but I do like your theory and that's what caught my attention, so I thought I snoop around for a while. Spider is too damn cool! Yeah, the ending just hit most people who played CM hard. Then again, there are many hints around the game that leads to he fact that there might be a real Spider. The question is when did we really met the real Spider and when exactly did Redips killed him (or whatever) and takes his place?

you are too funny! *waves* but yes.. I am just starting to read. I love it. Its great! way back there I loved it when aile was cursing about the bushes and leaves! its so cool! you should keep going *skips around* but you , I must say. are hilarious. to bad we cant talk on a messenger.Because I know I would love talking to you! *laughs like crazy* well if you get time though .. since I am sure you have many fans.^_^ you mind e-mailing me? no.. I'm not a stalker. But probably just love Spider close to as much as you. ^_^' but anyway..before I scare you with my long review . I will be going then . just wanted to compliment you though. Bye byes

Huh? :S I thought Redips is dead!

lalalalala /skips spoilers section and A/Ns) I have this funny feeling that any more and I'll find out something I wasn't supposed to, so I'll read the rest of it when I pass the game. =P It's great so far though, I hope there's a lot more when I get back to it. ^_^

Where's Marino?

Apart from that... Did X and Zero abandon the Ultimate Armour and Absolute Form?!?

Well... Zero took that easier than I thought. I thought the moment he sees Spider, he would try to rip him to shreds. And there are no reports on the whereabouts of Massimo, Marino, Cinnamon, or Gaudile.

Hm. Good fic overall, though there -are- a few nagging grammatical problems I can see. Nothing too horrible. The one thing that really gets me is Aile's vulgarity in the second chapter. I just don't see Aile as the type that would jump up and down and curse like that. He was modest in Command Mission, and it would make sense that he would be like that beforehand. Also, the fact that Axl and Spider were around at the same time in the past kind of confused me. That's mostly due to -my- speculation; I'm sure a reason can be made for it if it's thought about adequately. I'm just happy someone's taking the 'Redips kills Spider' theory somewhere and -doing- something with it.

I'm confused... This takes place past CM's ending, doesn't it? If it does, then where are the other characters?

Impresive. I had an error for reviewing the 4th chapter, so I'll put it here. But, um... let me see. 1...2...WHERE THE HELL IS ZERO, DAMMIT?! My 2nd, repeat 2nd, favorite character is not there. Oh, I get it. It's all in your storyline, right? :) ...Right? :( ...RIGHT?! >:(