I thought it was interesting. I was very good. Although I can't ever see Duo as anything other than a junk dealer and hanging out (likely married to) Hilde. :)

Dude, I so loved this. I'm pretty amazed that you were able to write this in one night.

ummm I liked it!

How sweet...luv it!_

Nice little scene...okay, so 'nice' is a truly pathetic word to use in a review, but it's very late and I haven't had sleep. Is 'poignant' better? Nice twist having Duo there. Well done!