You're paying for the box of tissues I used up. Seriously. Damn. I'm too sentimental for my own good. -; But, good job, doll.

the sequence was a little confusing, but the way you write make them all very moving. luckily that it had a sweet ending. i was so worried that Aya would still keep up his act of not liking Ken.

you're a great writer. keep it up.

Aya had cut out a heart from red construction paper. The slightly crooked heart was glued to a
lacy doily and in the center of the red paper, written in Aya's tiny, meticulous script were the gold-colored words, 'Will you be mine?'
aww! omg that was jush so cute! lol and very unexpected. hehe a slightly crooked heart. so un-aya like. and yet i can imagine that happening. lol good story. the angst worked well.

I thought poor Ken-ken's heart was going to break because Aya was being such a damned cold bastard. I actually need tissues right now.
Sorry, I just had a small tiff with my best friend and my emotions are all over the place.
Not to mention, your beautiful, wonderfully-written story is just marvelous.
You are such a great writer and I've read most your other fics. _

Aw, this was sweet! Well-written yet again. Perfect for Valentine's day (even if it isn't Valentines :) Anyway, great job as always. Perfect song too. Keep it up.

CT

*tear tear* aya has a heart! who would have guessed. i like the way you turned a sad fic in to a happier fic with the sweet ending. good job, love the fic!

*promptly dies* WAH! Ran's such a bastard! And he's such a sweetie too! WAH. Poor Kenken - talk about blowing hot and cold. And us poor readers - you really had us on an emotional rollercoaster. You have me longing to throttle Ran well and good throughout, and finally he's more than redeemed in my eyes - by CHOCOLATES AND A TACKY HEART-SHAPED CARD! HOW DO YOU DO IT, YOU EVIL THING, YOU?

Dang it! I'm crying here! At first, I wanted to gut Aya for being so cruel to Ken. But now, I'm just gonna bawl my eyes out.

That was so sweet and cute. I love the emotion you convey with your wonderful fics.

You just wanna hate Ran for treatin' Kenken like that, but then he has to go and do something sweet at the end. *sigh* . Makes ya believe things will work out in the end!

Beautiful fic! *waves her "RanKen Forever" flag*

*sigh* Gods, Ran was an ass but that's what makes him so...hot, ne? LOL, hot and cold, Ran the paradox.

*melts into a puddle of goo* I had read this before, but never reviewed! My bad! It was so lovely. My heart ached for Ken through most of it, but the end was so incredibly sweet! I loved it! You are so awesome! RanKen forever!

Midori_

Man, and here I was hoping I'd finally found someone else who dared to write an angsty, sad-ending songfic about their favorite couple... and then you had to end it all sweet. However, if you think I'm complaining, think again. I adored it! I love it when Aya gets mushy in any way (except when it concerns the /real/ Aya, and then it's just boring). So... awesome work! And may I just add, SHIN-E, TOMOE SAKURA!

omg that was so sweet! i was expecting a sad ending but that was sooooooooooooooo sweet!

O.O I almost believed they were gonna break up at the end... Nice twist, very cute... the rest... Angsty.

Very nice story. I like the depth of emotion you put in it. Well written, interesting and a very real type love going on. I want a guy like Aya. I guess I like the cruelty, the cold surface. I dunno. But I really like the story. You are an awesome writer.