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| Tenten Amakudari 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was very touching and funny at the same time. You were right on with Mr. Gosh and his feelings for Lenore. I really like that last line of the poem: "Men weren't meant to kill themselves on Valentine's Day." (The fact that you experienced what he's going through actually made it meaningful...I dunno why, but knowing that the writer put a bit of themselves in it gives me one more reason to read and enjoy it.) |
| Invader Bijou 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseaw...how sad, I loved it. |
| Mommaleasey 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is AMAZING! Such expressive words! Such beautiful tones! It's sad AND funny!I love it! This...I will Fav. |
| rionanspryte 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseRoman would be proud...its really sappy and cute. |
| xZAGRFAN 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAww very touching ! |
| Freyja Vanadis 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. Love the line about the snakes. |
| Rahh Gumba Foo 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseSounds just like Dirge would say it. You're a great writer! |
| Chibi_Manny 2005-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think this is the very core of Mr. Gosh. I love Lenore and this, if you ask me, is ggod enough to be in the comic itself. |
| Hobbit-Luvr 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseAw, sad but funny, worthy of Dirge if you ask me. I love Mr.Gosh too, I feel bad for him! :-P Me likey! |
| penniewise 2004-12-31 ch 1, | abuseIt was very spot on. I think you really captured Mr Gosh's somewhat apologetic behavior, and his tendencies to excuse Lenore's repeated attempts to kill him. good work! |
| Moo 2004-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseDefinately an Intriguing peice . . . I'm yet to grace the pages of the lenore series and I'm already impressed by the presened content. The Poem was heartfelt . . . as though Mr. Gosh actually existed. Bravo. Keep it up |
| RaidonKid 2004-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI didn't know what to do - laugh or cry... it was an interesting piece indeed. |
| soph 2004-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseomigosh, at first i thought it was weird, hilarious and cheesy.. but then at the end i was like.. man.. *teardrop* *teardrop* |