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degrassijayandalex
2008-05-06
ch 5,
abuseok well i just finished the last chapter that you have up number 5 and know that i have read all the chapters that you have up i have to say that chapter 4 was my favorite chapter out of all of them if i had to pick and the things that i liked in this chapter was when in the beging when alex is walking to shool and jay puts a hand on her shoulder and then she jumps around ha that part was funny lol and i really also liked the middle part when alex is like i think im going to go annoy the preppy blonde that sits in fromt of me then jay was like you wouldnt want to miss that then she was like dont mock me or il pound you lol that was funny.Anyway please HURRY UP AND UPDATE AND MAKE CHAPTER ^ cause i really want to know what is going t happen at that party
degrassijayandalex
2008-05-06
ch 4,
abuseok well i just finished chapter 4 and wow i think so far that chapter 4 is my favorite why because alex and jay had there first kiss in it and it didnt have as many funny parts in it as the chapter before it but there was something that was really funny was when alex asked what jay did in second grade and he was like i stole a jar of lollypops and he tried to eat all of them lol and i could really picture jay trying to do that when he was wonder lol anyway now im going to go and read the next chapter which i think might be the last one
degrassijayandalex
2008-05-06
ch 3,
abuseok well i just got finished reading the 3rd chapter adn oh my god i was laughing through the whole thing.You made this chapter really really well i thought you did,but somethings that i thought was funny was when towerz is trying to warn jay and he is like i heard some things shes crazy man then jay was like to him im sorry have you seen her lol i was lmao there lol and the other thing was in like the first paragraph when it said that alex have become friends with jay and towerz and you said that jay was still hot for her lol i could like picture that lol.Ok another thing was when jay was like to school for to alex when he found her befind the school lol that was funny lol.Ok then this was like one of the funniest things that happened in this chapter was when jay was like do you want to go on a date with me and alex is like your kidding right then here it is jay was like uh no im just going to go drown myself or something,later lol i was seriuolsy(sp?) lmao lol well,oh wait, then another thing that was funny was at the end adn alex was like i dont own a skirt then jay was like no dresing up then he was like hell you could come naked and then alex hit him over the head haha that part was funny to lol
degrassijayandalex
2008-05-06
ch 2,
abuseok well know i just read the second chapter and i have to say that i really really liked this chapter as much as i liked the first chapter but i still do have 3 other chapter to go and read so im going to just going to go post this then go read the other chaoters and review them to,but first i wanted to say that i was lmao when i read the one part when alex is talking to jay and she asks why he cares so much and he says i dont then she is like god and people think that im crazy lol i was really lmao anyway im going to go read the other 3 chapters so far its a really great fan fiction cant wait to see what comes next in the 3rd chapter
degrassijayandalex
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseok well i know that this going to be a great fan fiction just by reading the first page because it has some jay and alex in it and they are my favorite couple so far it is really really good and im going to go read the other 4(i think) chapters and read and review on them to
ellieincarnate
2005-08-03
ch 5,
abuseupdate soon pleze!
ASh
2005-06-08
ch 1, anon.
abusePLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE THIS FIC! I LOVE IT
justawritier
2005-02-07
ch 5,
abuseupdate soon.it is so good.i love jay and alex
00 BodySnatcher
2005-02-04
ch 1,
abuseaH! So far I only read chappi one, but I LOVE ur combacks for Alex, they really sound like stuff she'd sya! SO GOOD!
vortirla
2005-02-04
ch 5,
abusecool...a party is coming. oh, and someone better warn Paige and Craig that their classes will be extra annoying 2day. lol continue
XNotaprepX
2005-02-04
ch 5,
abuseMuy bien, Muy bien... Update soon, or my sanity will slowly leave me from guessing what's next...
Lobel's girl
2005-02-04
ch 5,
abuseGreat job update soon PUHLEESE
be11011
2005-02-04
ch 5,
abusecool i like it please keep writing its so good
Ale Curtis-Carter
2005-02-04
ch 5,
abuselove it
rora908
2005-01-22
ch 4,
abuseawesome, don't stop writing!
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