Gah, Miroku! *cry*

Love your writing style. The ending was great (so sad though ;_;)

That was really good...amazing...

omfg. no way. that was so...intense. thanks 4 making me cry. but, sango's never called him miroku, well in the english stuff she does. but i digress. that was the best, sad 1st chappie ever. i can't wait 4 the rest! XD

That was good for a tragic story.

Woah! Wow! I LOVE the format you used - both effective and original. It added tremendously to the story...

WHHY?! screams ::D

Interesting. I found the beating of his heart a slightly strange element at first but it helped the piece flow and eventually lead to sad but well-written conclusion. Even though I love my happy endings, I must say you did a great job with this piece.

This was a really good story, i liked it a lot. But it was sad at the end..Miroku dead...i don't even wanna think about it.

SEQUEL?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

WOW that as so sweet! and extremely sad...wish it were longer :D

That was one of the best Miroku/Sango stories I've read (even though it was so sad). You write Miroku so well! Great job ^.^

Aiee! That gave me the shivers! You just killed off half of my favourote het. pairing! =P

It was very well written. I loved it ^^

And I don't see much to critique you on o0 because well you're amazing so =]

Did he die? I'm confused...I think I should be sad, but I'm a little confuzzled...

Wow, that was really beautiful. I really liked how you trusted in us, the readers, intelligence instead of spelling things out for us. And showing the breakdown of coherent thought through bad grammar was a wicked cool idea. Good work!

did he die in the end?!?!!?!?!?
anywho..im alittle confused on wat miorku woar to bed...hm
i love how u wrote this..i tried writing a story but then i figuerd it would suck if my vocab was small and bla blabla so...im thinking...maybe a 1shot or something...

but i ned an idea!
any1!