 banks'-gurl-99 2004-11-14 . chapter 3so wut happens with joan and charlie? do they get married? |
 crazy little witchy 2004-11-11 . chapter 3Hi. I'm inspired. I wrote a story about Kevin too after I saw touch move. It's in here somewhere and the title is almost the same :p I always meant to do another chapter but I forgot or was tired or I had to study and then I forgot what I was going to write the second chapter about. I have to say even I like your story better. I got a lot of reviews saying that he could dance IN his chair and things like that. So now I'm going to get my lazy fingers to write that second chapter, and I hope that you don't think that I'm going to copy you or something like that, because our stories are really different. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and for inspiring me to continue mine.
-C L W |
 Beth Pryor 2004-11-03 . chapter 3You've imagined it almost exactly as I did. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity with us. Keep up the great work. |
 jane 2004-10-26 . chapter 3 I kind of figured you would take that route in dancing at his wedding. I was just curious as to why there wasn't any drama between Joan being the best man and luke. |
 Britta 2004-10-24 . chapter 3 I just love it! =) |
 meowsers 2004-10-20 . chapter 3 Glad you wrote it. I get tired of reading fics where Kevin's "dance at his wedding" means on his feet. I always thought it meant that he accepted the way he is and he would dance while in the wheelchair. Good fic. Like that Grace/Luke are still together. |
 Lady Maria 2004-10-20 . chapter 3I do like this. For a minute, due to the summary, I thought it was identical to another story on FF. (thank God it's not. I like this one much better.) In the first chapter, there's a typo where you say something like, "Suit, jacket, and fly." As a fly is either an insect or a thing that is closed by a zipper on pants, I'd hazard a guess that you meant "tie."
Thumbs up on a job well done; I could barely tell that English isn't your native language. |
 VanillaBean75 2004-10-20 . chapter 3That's really amazing!! You show so much sensitivity and insight in this story. Your command of the English language is superb, and you hit the nail on the head. Dancing is definately different than walking, and I can't think of a better way for the prediction to come true. You are truely talented! |