so far...i think this might b my fave chap.

lol...u are god

OMG! u know bout the pics, too! lol!

well, that was...weird...honestly. i would think link is loving on his heart...and for some reason, i kinda hate you.

SARIA DIES? wtf is wrong with you! jk...you should make link discover POPCORN! lol..jk =) keep writing, yo!

Oh MY holy JESUS! that was AWESOME! I LOVE UR...DISCRIPTAVE LANGUAGE! it makes it easy to feel what link is feeling.
YOU MUST WRITE...ok...i'll probably say...YOU MUST WRITE CHAP. 18! and YOU are an awesome speller...thank you. that tells me i'm not the only one...lol

i'm reading it...and it's...well, don't blame me! the first chapters are ALWAYS a LITTLE boring...but so far, i lke it! =D

ok i know im an idiot, but i dont get this at all... i just wanted to read a story where link and zelda... well you know. o my oh my link and zelda getting freaky! lol jk but if somehow this story was explained or summarized to i could understand what is going on here, it could be good. also i know i am a few chapters late but i LOVE links walkind song! LOVE IT!

What's this? An update? O:

-shock! horror!-

Hahahaha... Yeah, I have no right to say anything. XP

Anyway... Yay! It's updated! Hm... I've skimmed the previous chapters again ('cause I couldn't remember details XD) but I didn't notice any loose ends... maybe someone more observant than me will notice something. Either way this fic's still fun! Good luck with the rest of it, I can't wait to read it!

Aw... Link's dead! Saria, too? Man this is really getting weirder. I can't wait to read more, though. Good luck!

~ GoldenTalesGeek

P.S. I can't think of any loose ends you could tie up. Sorry!

Good story...Kind of confusing, but hey, good nonetheless... I like how you're depicting Kaepora Gaebora...ha...

I will continue watching this...

haha they have hospitals in hyrule? but isnt it sposed to be like medieval, knightly times? and i still dont really understand the zelda-is-link's-heart thing, but maybe i'm just forgetting something important...?

Would they even have a hospital like this in medieval Hyrule?

Very interesting. I kinda feel bad for Malon being startled. She didn't deserve that. This was a decent chapter despite the fact I was expecting a little more. Well, I've rambled on for long enogh. Good luck with the next chapter. Oh, and Vlad? "Nurse" isn't capitalized.

oh suspense!! I think... hm, yes. Quite suspenseful. I enjoyed reading that chapter... but then again, all of your chapters are enjoyable reads.

...Yup. Now I'm in a good mood, thanks for that, because it's somehow your doing :D

Zelda's awesome! ANd funny. And . . . kinda mean.
Wait. Zelda is Saria. Saria is Zelda. Or there is some crazy coincidence.
But if they're the same person . . . then Link was in love with Zedla all along. Or he was in love with Saria. Or both of them. This is CONFUSING.
WRITE MORE!
Please let me know when the next chapter's up!