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Reviews For: Kiss Revised

BishiHarem
2006-09-15
ch 1,
abuseNice take on it! I like it.
Forever Rahhel
2006-04-25
ch 1,
abuseI don't know if I reviewed for the original, but this is great
and a nice prolouge to your story.
Facelemon
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseMuch better...
OUBWIUBGPPPINSOJNONOICNFSOI...
2006-01-09
ch 1,
abuseComplete! Hurra!

Oh, great story. You really 'nailed' it this time.

Cheerio,
Naon
simply -v-
2005-12-30
ch 1,
abuse^^ yeah it was good.
halestorm
2005-09-17
ch 1,
abuserell good keep up the good work
4 awesome and not 4 good
2005-06-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was a great new angle at the kiss-scene.
yume-face
2005-01-19
ch 1,
abusevery nice.
Incognito girl
2004-10-21
ch 1,
abuseWow
That was really good. Over these past years few I've read so many eva fics rienacting "the kiss," but I never thought about it from that angle. I look forward to the main story in 02.

Please keep up the good work.^_^

-Incognito Girl
Kishi
2004-10-20
ch 1,
abuseMan, oh man. Another good author that I'll never match up to. Great...
dennisud
2004-10-19
ch 1,
abuseYa know it's kinda like you get your cousin Ernie who's been homeless and gave him a complete make-over! ya did good here with the "New" version.

dennisud
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