I liked the way you ended the story. You tied up the loose ends and put Trent and Daria together. I like the adoption subplot. It was a good way to go. A

I read all of it! That was incredible, and very intriguing. Your methods of characterization were A-1, and they really had depth to them. I could feel the inner turmoil Daria faced... How many people do you know that have been in situations not quite as dramatic, but still similar? Can't wait for your next fic,as I give this one an A

A bit too sappy. B.

I've been waiting for the final chapter of this fic for quite a while. The emotional turmoil of a troubled marriage is heart-wrenchingly portrayed. The complications of the situation are also handled with great sensitivity. An author to keep your eye on.