I absolutely enjoyed every word of this lovely fic. Jack's proposal was especially exquisite. I love the way he's putty in James's hands, but completely dominates the conversation with Lord Norrington. Breathtaking characterisation; absolutely spot-on for James and Jack, and James's father sprang instantly to life in my mind. Loved the detail about Jack being able to 'read' the man because he knows James so well. Wish there was much, much more of this!

And of COURSE they should be betrothed for all time. I don't suppose I have to tell you to ignore the nay-sayers completely! Am running off now to dream about the kind of rings (or other emblems of love entirely) they might get each other. And their vows. Wow! Thanks for giving me most exciting food for reflection. :-)

I'm really quite interested in this fic, however, seeing as how you've not updated since 2004, I imagined I won't be reading the end of it... Very good writing though.

Oh, and please ignore the people who decide to represent the ugly portion of this world by spewing their unnecessary and uninteresting views. Ignore particularly the imbecile who doesn't even know how to spell "anonymous", and therefore abbreviates their screen name to "anon", because, just with that, they have proven that they have nothing of value to say.

Honestly, I have no idea what dark corner they crept out of to read a fic in which they have no interest and then decided to be idiotic enough to write to you their ridiculous reasonings. If I was someone with power, I would have them murdered, and then give you an audience worth writing for.

To sum it all up: Great job.

um...ew. thats all i gotsta say. y do you like all these guy/guy pairings? its okay once in a while but if thats all u like? um a little weird on your part. sorry! try a girl/guy fic.

This was pretty pointless. And you do know that in those days sodomy and being gay was a crime that you could be hanged for? How is this realistic? Think things over before you write them.

Nyaa! So funny! I love how you write Jack. Thanks so much!

More? Please? Very funny without being over the top.

This is brilliant! Yay for Jack's mind-control powers! Might there possibly at some point in the future be a sequel? Describing their wedding, and wedding night? I would enjoy that. *attempts Jack's trick* Btw, I've been reading your stuff over at Live Journal, and I love your zombie!porn to death...and beyond! *snerk* Great work!

Another chapter? Pretty please?

lol. this is pretty good so far. i can't wait to see how the wedding goes *giggles* please update soon. ja matte ne till then

astra: how sweet and when are they gonna marry i wanna know and how's gonna be the bride i love it

GAbriël: if i want to marry you astra do i also have to ask your father first?

Lucifer: yes astra do we have top ask you father?

Astra: there is no way in hell i'm gonna marry you two idiots

gabriël: but there is a way in heaven then

lucifer: yes lets go ask her father *takes of to ask astra's father*

astra: no stop come back *runs after them* UPDATE SOON

This continues being sweet - I actually think I like James father. :-)

And please ignore people complaining about lack of historical correctness in this - not every tale told should be absolutely true to the period. If it was, then where would cursed pirates fit in in the first place?

I think your reality, and Jack's, is a beautiful thing, Lady. This is a very sweet piece. Would love to see the wedding, if you are in the mood to continue.

wow i loved it so far! it's really really sweet and i especially love the last two lines because that statement from Jack is really not easy to get! so i'm asking really nicely if you would pleasse update the second chapter soon? *hugs*

Me

am a big sparrington fan and enjoy your ficlets, but wish you would write a longer angsty type story as you are very talented. that said, (and this is not a flame!) i dont think a marriage story is in keeping with the characters. especially jack and james living in the 17th century. in todays world it is a hot topic, but seems a little "off" for men of that period, particularly a pirate who is if nothing else, all man.

Sweet, very sweet :-)