Thank you again for writing this. You noticed a major point in the old vs. new conflict that was at the heart of New Yevon and Trema, and handled it deftly. Isaaru and Baralai being related not just as cousin snakes, but venomous breeds was a parallel that reflects in the animals and people both. I enjoyed the repetition of 'through the air like a silk shawl lifted by a breeze' to bring the beginning and ending together, causing Baralai to answer "I will" not only to using venom, but also to killing Trema. Similarly, Trema's permissions for Zanarkand and the destruction of the past are ominous here in his passivity.

Thank you; I enjoyed reading this fic, and appreciate it.

The comparison of the two snakes to Issaru and Baralai are so beautifully orchestrated, your style of writing is impeccable. It makes so much sense...Bah! I really am horrible at reviews. Thank you by the way for reading and reviewing my story, I'm humbled.