That was a very powerful story, awesome job.

AAAAAAAH! People, get in here and READ THIS GIRL'S STORIES! SHe's A GENIUS! You write like an empassioned 20-something, yet you're a FRESHMAN IN HIGH SCHOOL? I'm a Sophomore in College and I don't think I could do somethign with the subtlety and feeling your romance pieces hold. Girl, you're just good!

*stunned*... you almost made me sniffle! That was amazing! I understand you're proud of it!

I love these songfic! I have one word for this one.

aaaaaaawwwww. thats sweet.:)

Wow... Very good...

awww...

Very powerful. You moved me, Candy. An excellent fic, and you chose a perfect song.

Oh that was great! I love all your songs/fic. They are all great! (I am trying to write one myself, it's hard for me.)

Wow! That was good...and the song you picked was perfect! I loved it!

Yes, this is your best piece yet! WAY TO GO! I doubt that I can live up to that! Look at what you are doing to my reputation! ) Anyways, an excellent job! I'm glad that my idea helped you. This was a great piece at capturing the emotion between Ami and Ani. I also love the presence of the rain. It really added to it. When she cried, it rained. When she stopped, so did the rain. Very cool. ) KEEP WRITING!

i just figured that the song captured their relationship well :)

Ohhhhhh I love it! That was so sweet! It almost didn't need the song with it. You captured both of their feelings very well... Bravo. :)

I will re-read this in the morning. Write now it's midnight and I's like really tired. I liked the story and would love to read it again just to make sure I had every detail in it. It's so sweet. The way you wrote Amidala's character is the way I always visioned her to be. It's good to have another great story by you. Keep up the good work!