Reviews for Disgaea: Aku no Tsubasa

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Dr. Gadget XVII 2008-08-06 ch 12,	abuseAh, I remember reading it back then in '04. It was awesome back then, and it still is today. Maybe the fact that I can invision it actually happening, maybe because I support the Laharl x Flonne pairing, but it still retains its original charm. I don't care when you update, I just know it will be awesome when you actually do. The grammar is book-worthy, and it's one of those which I never get tired of. Don't feel any obligation to update, as some people who rush you don't appreciate you. Oh well, but your avatar is nice, too! As always, this will be on my Author Alert list, as it was in '04 on my old account, waiting for the day that might never come.
Love at Last Sight 2008-07-13 ch 11,	abuseI like read this everyday. Still waiting for an update. :\ -Waits- You sure you going to update? EVER?! My life seriously depends on this. >.< Please update o Ill keep bugging you. :3 I sincerly love this story and the fact you wont update is like killing me. :\ Serious. PLEASE FREAKING UPDATE THE STORY. DX ONLY A FEW CHAPTERS TO GO U SAID THEN ITS DONE FORVER! PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT! SOB. Please? D:
Love at Last Sight 2008-06-25 ch 12,	abuseWow. I read this all in one day. Im amazed. I love it so much, but I note you havent updated in 3 years so I guess I should give up hoping that you'll update soon. Just had to say that I though this story was amazing. Totally and utterly amazing. I espically loved the length of the chapters and was SO happy that this was LaharlxFlonne. :D This is the best Disgaea fic Ive read yet and Im truly dispointed that you havent continued. Very very sad. I hope this review will change your mind and add those last two chapters you said would end it off. 14 Chapters right? Well This was genius and amazing. Just had to say it. And I pray that you'll update. Sincerly. Ill keep it in my prayers. xD So yea. Beautiful story. I love LaharlxFlonne. Just PLEASE update. Dx And make a confession. >D So you heard my plea. I love you and this story. xD Update and Ill praise you forever. ;O Thanks alot. Please update! LAHARLXFLONNE! XD -Doctah
DisgaeaFanBoy 2008-06-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseHere's a idea finsh the story DUH!
sara haruko takenouchi kami... 2008-03-07 ch 2,	abuseYou named your ninja Naruto and Kakashi... Yeah, very creative alright (rolls eyes)
Maloney Oni 2008-01-10 ch 12,	abusePlease continue it!
DaemonGirlJay 2007-07-19 ch 12,	abuseoh luv this story! Best written Disgaea story I've seen on fanfic. Plz write how it ends. I've gotta know. -gets pumped with energy- - I'm so addicted, yay! ^-^ plz update, I'm begging u.
KappeZ 2007-05-29 ch 12, anon.	abuseI've read this story up to chapter 12, and I think it's very well done. Sorry, but I am reviewing from memory mostly. I personally do not think there should be romance in Disgaea, but you did a good job with it. Everyone is in character (though Etna strays out of character just a little at times) and your own characters have their quirks that make them fit in perfectly. Setsuna and Chiriko I liked the most. The humor was well done also, it has that Disgaea feel. I especially loved the reviews for the next episode with Etna's wacky imagination and everyone's side comments, just like in the game. The battle sequences were good, though I would have liked it for Laharl to use some sword moves as well, not just his signature three moves. Setsuna was a bit overpowered, like you said, but not a biggie. Overall: a great story. I am eagerly awaiting the conclusion :)
blank 2007-05-13 ch 12, anon.	abuseToo awesome, will the last chapter ever make itz debut into our lives? Please tell me yes. o.o
DarkMoonPrincess 2007-01-03 ch 12,	abuseI love this story i think its the best flonne laharl story ever! You develop the characters so fully, and theres just the right mix of romance and action. Please continue it soon. It's awesome!
lolnopples 2006-10-12 ch 12,	abuseThis is the best disgaea fanfic I've seen. Most Laharl/Flonne stories I see are too short, but I love how you made the story long (even though it took a while to read the chapters one by one :P). I really hope you continue writing this!
Yumi 2006-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhen will you update the rest of the chapters of your awesome story? I want to read them soon! PLEASE!! =D
b4k4 ch4n 2006-07-11 ch 12,	abuseWhaa! Great story! I love it! Spent the whole night reading it. Well, it's morning now so, haha? Aww, Flonne and Laharl is so cute~ You write them very well! I always looked forward to seeing what was going to happen to them next =) Although the weird team work pratice thingy was a bit odd. With all those names to remember, I had a difficult time xD Yeah! Team work is important! Then again, I usually just get Laharl to kill off an enemey by himself in the game. I just started to play Disgaea 3 days ago xD Which isn't good because I get confused while reading this. Who's Priere? Lol? All I know is that she's an Alternate Overlord. Ah well, I'll find out sooner or later. Haha! Thankstaking Day? Genius! What a funny holiday xD I'm surprised Laharl got beat up by a group of other demons. What level is he? Aww, beginning of chapter 12 made me sad. Stupid Yuki, he should die! shakes fist I don't like people interfering with Laharl and Flonne! >=O Then again, it makes things interesting so as long as there's a happy ending, I'll be happy =D I would be scared from Laharl's swearing as well. Poor Flonne. I'm surprised she knew what she did too! It would ahve been funny if everyone thought SHE jumped out of the window as well xD Wow, Etna liked that guy huh? Hehe, I'm glad you added the little zombie owner dude. He's funny. He likes Etna? Aww!! How sweet =) Haha, Laharl's nightmare, is it REALLY a nightmare? xD I bet he wouldn't mind that kiss laughes Laharl has wings too? Wow! I really never thought of that before xD I kinda thought of his cape/scarf to be his wings ^^;; Hehe, Laharl wearing Flonne's silk shirt, that's funny xDD Oh yeah! Haha! Gordon's funny in this fic! So funny! I just can't remember what he did that made me laugh so hard. The Rejects I found hilarious xD PRISM RANGERS! Yeah, Flonne's English way of pronouncing her name DOES sound like a dessert xP Oh boy, I'm jumping from chapter to chapter =/ I really like this fic! Keep up the good work! Hmm, I don't think the flashbacks are such a bad thing though. I get confused easily so the 'FLASHBACK' and 'END OF FLASHBACK' actually help me =P Sorry for being an amateur xD But I do think the censors take some of the feeling away. It's seems a bit more comical than threatening lol. Looking forward to your next chapter! Can't wait to see what happens. So Yuki does like Flonne? I thought he was just using her O_O Laharl! KILL HIM! Unless he's actually a good person xD
Judy 2006-07-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is hilarious! [My mom is wondering why I'm laughing like crazy]. Continue writing!
SharinganLover 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abusehey! ddodd update! no really or or I I I will cry wah

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