Great Story!!

I like the idea of him being another wind preter but you have to write more.

Update soon!

Yay! You up-dated! You haven't up-dated in like forever! It's been so long that I almost for got what was going on in the story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter! But I predict that it won't be up-dated in more than a month...please prove me wrong!

Finally an update, I can't wait to see the next chapter of this soon!

WOW THIS STORY IS VERY GOOD, BUT IM GONNA BE TRUTHFUL TO YOU. THE ONLY HTING I DIDN'T LIKE ABOUT IT IS THAT YOU DON'T WRITE LONG ENOUGH CHAPTERS. THEY REALLY NEED TO BE LONGER. BUT I TRUELY LOVED IT!

Yeah, I'm glad that Himeno isn't dead, can't wait to see the next chapter soon!

Whoo! Yeah, I think I remember Mayune calling everyone a big fat stupid idiot...or at least an idiot. She was never very nice. :)

Good chappie! Make writer's block away! ::waves wand::

I don't think there was an older Shin in the anime...was there? And I only have the first Pretear manga...

This was good! I wanna read the next chapter now!

M...pretty neat chapter. On to the next one!

Cool! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

WHE! THAT WAS GOOD!

Awesome! short but cool! i cant wait to see what else you come up with, and remember to live while playing your game, i do the same with Fianla Fantasy series ( i am currently 9 hours into 8, again). interesting, it seems as if Himeno and hte Princess of Darkness are one somehow. nice.

its really good but short i'm excited bout the next chap!

i would be very pleased if you updated soon. i really like it so far, to bad each chaoter is so short... please try to make them longer.