Amazing, you broke my heart and mended it again within the same story! Great job, I loved the airport scene because it was realistic, even if it wasn't too happy. But the end sure made up for it :)

A lot of people are saying to make another, but I disagree. This is a great ending and it leaves the reader thinking, it's up to the reader to decide what's to happen next.

This was so well write, and I can see Paris just saying too late. She made her decision to leave, and Paris won't just come back on a moments notice, even if she now knows that Rory was love her.

I must say, I'm a lit fan, but if in the show Rory was a lesbian, I would totally want her to fall in love with Paris, lol.

Nice story!

~Kell

That was great, wonderful. It held such passion and emotion. It was just...well wonderful!

We are waiting for more, what are you doing? you should be working on new chapters!

I'm guessing there probably wont be an update for this. Pity. This is really good I wish you would update

YAY! she came back!
oh that's so wonderful
hopefully Rory won't screw it up this time
kick ** fic ^_^

Please tell me there is more to the story. This is really really really good. I almost cried it was sad.

OMG PLEASE TELL ME YOU AREN"T STOPPING THERE PLEASE

nice. Seems a bit out of character for Paris to just say 'too late' and leave...i don't know. It;s really good though, always thought there was a bit of subtext theere.

Sweet real and very painful

I love it please write more

Oh it's not out of charakter, I liked your story, it makes sense to me. I always thought the clever little Gilmore is wasted to the boys. ;)

Great fic. You're right about the characterization, but I don't think it hurts in any way. I love the ending: I love that Paris doesn't go back after Rory's admission of love, (I'm kind of tired of the standard airport->"I love you"->happy ending scene), and I love the uplifting bit at the very end even more. It would be cool to see a sequel to this (I like your style), but on the other hand I think it's perfectly fine to just let it end on that note. So whatever it is, keep up the god work.

Ok - that was the *suckiest* cliffhanger in the history of cliffhangers.

By 'suckiest', of course, I mean best, what with the total and complete wicked unexpected-ness that comes with a cliffhanger of the 'broken-hearted who get their hearts squished on airport terminal linoleum' variety.

Very neat story...I would have never seen Paris and rory's relationship got that far...but it's interesting. I really really like your writing!! Really nice detailing and nice way you give a little information at a time. Oh...and very tantalzing ending...Post more soon!!
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Can you make a sequel? Oh please, please do it. This was amazing, wonderful, I loved it. Really intense writing. Thank you.