 FireKai 6/9/08 . chapter 1Excellent fic. But it was so sad, poor Seto. |
 jaks-phantom 1/26/06 . chapter 1very sad and you still kept Seto in character, very nice work -sobs- |
 faithandfell 12/3/05 . chapter 1Make Jou wright back!
Please *begs*
You rock
Whoop! |
 mandapandabug 10/27/04 . chapter 1that's sad. in a good way! i liked it. you really showed Seto's point. it was kind of OOC but what good Seto/Jou fic isn't? though Jou is in the right charater. one-shot right? well bye then. review you later_ |
 AbhorsenSabriel87 10/27/04 . chapter 1*tears in eyes, sob* How adorable! You are SO kind to Seto-kun! Now it makes me mad at Jou... Oh well. I really don't like many blondes in the first place. I guess though it's only 'cuz of my weird yaoi-lovin' mind that I can see what Kaiba sees in his "daydreams". Oh well. You said it's a one-shot, so I won't pester you to write more, but I will ask that you write what happens when Kaiba gets back! That'd be interesting! Anywho, ciao! |
 Ryuueiki 10/24/04 . chapter 1This fanfic was great, yet, very sad at the same time. I think you did a great job with this fanfic, kepping Seto in character... |
 Silver Wing Tamer 10/23/04 . chapter 1Wow. I wish this wasn't a one-shot. It'd be the perfect story if could be updated. Well, I really liked this latter portraying Kaiba's POV. It was so so awesome/sad/suspenseful/loving/hurtful/jealous/wanting! I know I'm missing some other things to describe it like depressing and suprising and stuff. Anyway, this was really good. I liked it! |
 Freak09 10/22/04 . chapter 1That is so sad! So incredibly sweet and sad! Just an idea, but you could do a follow up! You could tell what Jounouchi did when he read the letter! Just a suggestion you seriously don't have to use it! |
 MariksGurl666 10/22/04 . chapter 1Nice...thiswasn't one-shot, was it? Please don't say it was! Please update! |
 anaraz 10/22/04 . chapter 1seto is an idiot!
scared udiot |
 Misura 10/22/04 . chapter 1An enjoyable and interesting look inside Kaiba's mind. I like the idea of this being a letter to Jounouchi, especially with the way Kaiba ends it. Mai is portrayed rather harshly in this (that is, I assume the 'she' he was speaking of was her), though this letter is, of course, Kaiba's view on things. I liked to read this letter-fic. - |
 Dark Magician Of Chaos 10/21/04 . chapter 1Really sad ;; |
 Sakusha Saelbu 10/20/04 . chapter 1That was an excellent story. |