its a very good story dont leave it there u need to finish it and u better make sure that sango and miroku end up together there such a cute couple

I think this is very could. Ithink you should countine with Miroku's Thoughts! :)

Gah!so much mushieness!must shut my eyes!..
okay..ignore that.

DUDE...that was like awsome first chapter...you should have left it that way so that it leaves the 'mystery!'
I sorry i just like really sad things...sigh!

YOU MUST CONTINE! It's amazing! (Hapy ending please?) Sango and Miroku!

I love this story!

O continue and the poems are nice, much better than mine anyway

SO SAD poor Miroku! Oh Yes Please continue! your story rox hard! CONTINUE!

Keep writing this its great! Have sango "accidentally" go to Miroku's home or vice versa.

OMG SO GOOD!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!! How can you stop there?! They have to meet again and then admit true feelings! Lol please continue this it would be a shame if you didn't.

CONTINUE! CONTINUE! Your poems are so great - you have to continue!

I love ur story. U should definetly finish it!

u should cont it. make it a full story. in the end they should be both together

I really like this; please continue! Beautiful poems and I love your style :-)

hey countinue the story i want to know what happen please your story i really good so far dont stop

Oh yes, please continue! I beg of thee! Happy ending? Yes no maybe so?