Wow...i love the story. Hwoarang is soo funny and Julia too. ^^
Oh oh and it's so romantic with Julia and Hwoarang!
Please go on soon...;D

Sry for my bad language but i'm from germany!!

WHAT!? A CLIFFY!?!? YOU'RE EVIL! EVIL! I'm really rooting for these two! Not enough good fics out there with this pairing. Congrats on 32 chapters! That's quite an accomplishment!

"“Can you please not do that” A voice said from across the room. Hwoarang turned his head the other way to see a dark haired woman standing there. The woman was wearing medical scrubs and writing on a clipboard he held out in front of him. A stethoscope hung loosely from her neck." Pick a gender. Please.

"“I’m your nurse and its best if you lay back down. You’ve been unconscious for three days. You need to lie back down and get something to eat.” She said sternly." How can he get something to eat if he lays back down?

If he was leaving immediately, why/how did Steve find him three days later?

"“Saving face I guess, for me and her.”" I don't understand what you mean by that.

"“I am aware I made a mistake I just don’t know what to do.”

“Where is she?”" If both of these are said by Hwoarang, they should be in the same quotation.

"“Thank you Steve.” Hwoarang said as the two fighters shook hands. They laughed as they both parted ways

“What are you going to do now?” Hwoarang called to Steve." Should be in the same paragraph.

"'I am going to train with Marshall Law and Paul.'" If you say one guy's first and last name, you should do the same with the other.

...Where did Lili come from...?

This chapter really needs a proofread, honey. And good luck on your next one.

-Liz

been waiting ages for a new chapter! worth it though. update soon.

Hey, great chapter. Lots of action as usual, and I like how you incorporated some of the Tekken storylines into this. Hopefully Hwoarang will get his act together and stop being a coward so he and Jules can finally hook up. Looking forward to the next update! ~Sage

Well i'm guessing you read the tekken 6 storyline huh? Well Hwoaranh did actually beat Jin, but devil Jin put Hwoarang in the hospital. I wonder if your going to include Jin now since I see where this story is going. I can't wait for it either. If only they made a cg movie out of it.

OMG! plz continue i want 2 kno wat happeneds 2 hwoarang! thanks so much! bye! ^_^

OMG!
Hwoarang! Whats going to happen?
Very good chapter. Excellent description too!
Update soon. Julia HAS to end up with Hwoarang..or is this it for Hwoarang??
No!
:D Brilliant. I have to say this is the best sotry I have read on FanFiction.
xfantasygirlx

Wow. This is gret. From a few comments you made you don't speak english natively, but yet you did a great job with the tory. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon.
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come on! its not that ** hard to beet devil jin ;p nice use of hwoarangs ending sequence! update soon!

I like how you protrayed Lili in this story. It's too bad that Hwoarang and Julia haven't made up yet. And yeah, Devil Jin is dangerous. I love how you used the ending video to set the stage for the fight. Keep up the good work.

x.lIZ.x

Hey, haven't read this fic in awhile. So far, as usual, it's awesome. "Well..uh..he can kick pretty high." Haha I love all the action and humor, and you've portrayed all the characters' personalities perfectly. Update quicker! ~Sage

Me again.
Please updat soon. I want to know what happens and if Steve develops a crush on Julia. hehe.

Brilliant fanfic. HwoarangxJulia are great together!

I love this story.
Tis very god!
I can't wait until your next chapter.