Omg awsome

Aw...he fell in love! That was so cute!
X3 You're so good at writing. ^^

*wibbles* I loved this...of course the last 2 statements said the world

Aw how sweet!

An excellent story. The explaination of how jounin would have kids and hide them made me feel sort of hollow and sad.

cdk

OMG! It's marvelous!!
I mean it! so short and so perfect.

Althought I kinda perveived as a more practical feeling from kakashi that the innocent and surprised one from Iruka ^^U...still love it though, thinking in all the conflicts ahead just amke me love this little piece much more! that's a great short story ^^.

That was just so ** swet!>_< I love it!! you write very well indeed.. your descriptions are quite good o_O

Stands with mouth open making no noises...
Wow. And wow. I really liked this piece. The last lines just killed me.

This is a great oneshot, and the part with Kakashi's hidden child made me think. This was awesome!

Oh god. That last line was just beautiful. It fits so perfectly. This story is WONDERFUL.

I liked what Kakashi said at the end. Nicely written and cute story. Kakashi's pretty blunt isn't he?

that was really good. Great job and thanks for writing it! =^-^=

Oh god I LOVE this story! It was just way too short. Just wanted to let you know how great it was. Keep writing.

It's pretty slow but very good. Wish I had more to say, but I can't write reviews well.

This is a great fanfict! I especially enjoyed Iruka-sensei's reaction when he understood what was going on - so like him to be this clueless ^^
And Kakashi wanting to write him a letter was a very good and cute idea. Nice fict!

~Lunael