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| SweetPrincess4eva 2006-09-23 ch 1,  | abusethat is so sweet of Emma. I like this. |
| alchemy dream 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuseI dunno how I stumbled on this, but I'm glad I did. It was very well written. I'm really warming up to the idea of Em and Sean, and I think this is a very good closure to their experience together. I like the subtle interaction between Emma and Ellie as well. Again, very well written. |
| WritingIsMyDream 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abusehmm...not bad, I'd like to read more though. update soon. |
| semmaluvr 2005-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseis that it? u kinda left things off. try making it longer. |
| antiIRONY 2004-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. Please continue. |
| keeponwritin 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abuseQuite lovely. I dug. |
| rememberese 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abusethanks everyone! especially for constructive criticism, i appreciate it. i'll try to be more aware of my mistakes next time. if you haven't seen "back in black" i expected it to be confusing. if you have seen that episode, i still could see how you would find it a bit confusing. once again, thanks. |
| anonymous 2004-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseokay, so, it was full of angst and kept me wondering. i did like it, but what turned me off was the grammatical error of "should of" which doesn't exist. it's "should have" or "should've" and ultimately can cause a person to stop reading a story, which i tried not to do with yours, because i liked it. but for future reference and readers, "should've." :) |
| Sweetiepie78 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abusei like it...but it was confusing... |
| Amanda 2004-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethis sounds really good. update, i'm a huge Ellie/ Sean shipper is please leave the two of them together. other wise is's great! keep it up. |
| danni 2004-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abusehey that was good but i have 1 question what happened with the shooting is that actually an episode thats coming? well would you email me back and please tell me thanks! |
| Di 2004-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE IT! I am a big Elli and Sean fan but I still like Emma...I think that Elli and Emma would make good friends! |
| yusuf-mumtaz 2004-10-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work! You should definitely write more in the future... |