I agree. This is really good.. I hope you didn't completely stop writing this. It's been years though.. I'm holding onto the tiny ray of hope that perhaps you haven't forgotten about your work. Update soon. For your fans? :D

Okay, why didn't you continue this? besides the fact that it was extremely long-winded, it seemed to be going somewhere, like something was bound to happen, and Ridley would have something to do with it. So why'd you stop?

The opening was very good and descriptive. I like the interaction between the two rivils. I doubt you are ever going to update this, but you have an excellent start. Please continue.

The dream sequence was very well written. Poetic and descriptive. I don't see her monologue afterwards as neccassary. Hunter the computer just isn't as good a verbal sparring partner as Ridley is. Not sure if you'll ever be updating this, but you have a great start. Even so, it works just as well as a one shot.

i have to say, this is one of the bes metroid fics i have ever read. the use of diction, the setting of the clash, the dramatic mood, the interaction between the two old rivals, and the aftermath of her dreams and the actions she takes are all very well done. the way you showed samus, that while she was the deadilest hunter in the galaxy, the fact that she remembers the faces of all of the people shes killed shows a side so rarely seen in this fiction. the way your told ridelys side, what with the immortal and the haunting, really well done. I hope that you will continue this story, but i dont blame you if you dont. i myself am a writer, so i know how hard it is to find inspiration for a storys continuation, but all the same, think about it. GOOD LUCK AND PLEASE KEEP GOING!

... This story... I remember reading it a long time ago. It is even more amazing than I remember. The depth, the emotion, the colour, all of it; amazing. Your grammatical usage and descriptive writing techniques are astounding. The emotive portrait you painted, through you eloquent writing style, is filled with a furious passion -- such that I have never seen before. Your spelling is sound as well as supportive to the whole of the structure that is this story; I have read it over ten-fold, and still I have yet to find any fault, any blemish, to your writing. Such steadfastness is not only admirable, but difficult to find in this day and age. I commend your skills, and praise your writing, but above all else, I adore this story. I hope that one day, you will continue this literary work, and continue to enrapture any of those who can appreciate fine writing.

May the Lord Keep You and Hold You.

Gustauve Drakenhime I

You should update this. It's really good.

-=this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off=-

Cool, Ridley should get his own game. Flying, shooting plasma from the mouth, controlling Space Pirates, all kinds of stupid **.

Very nice indeed. It is hard to find an opening chapter that catches the imagination as well as this one. Your portrayal of Ridley is very well done, and the fight scene was especially lovely, bringing up a vivid mental picture. I would love to see more of this - please continue? I would like to see what the change in Ridley's eyes meant during the battle...

Wow. This is a great story. Beautiful grammar and very detailed scenes. Work on that summary and keep writing. Rating comes in chapter 2.

you have to update, keep going with this. this is an excellent story that must continue.

Aye, the summary is very bad for such a good story. I came in expecting something much worse than what I found. Obviously I can't prejudge on plot because you're just developing it but what you've got so far is very good. You have an R rated that way because it's an adult fic, not an "adult" fic. It's maturely written but not for "mature readers," as usually goes with typical sex fics and other trash.
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The bold for Ridley was a nice touch and I very much like the way he sounds like the devil himself. I would suggest making him sound a bit more dramatic such as "I am immortal. There is no one in all the heavens or on any earth that could ever kill me...especially not you, Huntress." Not that exactly, but some times Ridley was more poetic in his language than others. Oh, and I despise the word Huntress. The femininity of it annoys me since Hunter works just as well for both genders. But that said, this is a great start to what could be a great story. Don't disappoint.

Very interesting (I would change summery makes it look like crap...no offence) 3 out of 5 for now.

When I first saw this, I thought that it would be bad, now I know, I was wrong. This is very good, like it a lot! I don't see any mistakes either. Keep it up!
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The fight scene was very well done, it made me think a little bit about if Samus is just like Ridley.

I agree. It's really interesting, and well written. I'm curious as to to outcome of this...