 toothchick 1/16/10 . chapter 1This was such a fun story! |
 Merrily-Macabre 8/23/06 . chapter 1LOL "Transparent" hehehehe I enjoyed your story :) |
 achingankle 4/7/06 . chapter 1 I loved the ending with Rick and Griss, it was so nice and simple. I love it |
 just lurking 9/25/05 . chapter 1Enjoyed it!
jL |
 Megara1 1/17/05 . chapter 1Hi !
You portrayed easily the reactions of their co-writters !
Love the sentence with the evidence and the end was really good !
A great short fiction, more please ! |
 untapdtreasure 12/19/04 . chapter 1i like this one. it is funny funny funny
that is sweet you hardly ever see griss and warrick really talking anymore |
 rokothepas 10/22/04 . chapter 1I enjoyed reading this. Very good and imaginative answer to the challenge. Thanks for posting it:) |
 eac-dudette 10/21/04 . chapter 1lmao omg that was amazing! lol one of the best challenge stories i've ever read |
 jtbwriter 10/21/04 . chapter 1That's good-very good!
I love the way Gris is ready to marry Sara and
knows it would be right for Warrick and Catherine!
Great story-thanks! |
 Pheo 10/21/04 . chapter 1How sweet! I like how you had Warrick find out-he's Grissom's fave and so many people have Grissom confide in Catherine. This is a fresh outlook and it's well-written. :) |
 Nerwen Aldarion 10/21/04 . chapter 1No you have to continue, that was great, I want to know what the answer to the test was, will Sara say yes? oh please continue |