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KatanaKira
2006-03-11
ch 2,
abuseaw thats so cute!
vytiri
2005-09-21
ch 2, anon.
abuseOh, poor Siri. I feel really bad for him now, especially since he was crying in the bathroom, right? Poor lil baby. Well, at least he has Remus. I guess Regulus doesn't really have anybody. Waiting for more, I say "goodbye". Love, me.
crazy-lil-nae-nae
2005-06-09
ch 2,
abuseI like it! Keep up the good work ^_^
Regina Rex
2005-05-11
ch 2, anon.
abuseI don't know where I stand on designer babies. They don't bother me, but it's kinda like playing God. Hm. Very good story, update soon.
Dark Angel's Blue Fire
2005-05-03
ch 2,
abuseOh cool!
i love it!
Cant wait for the next chapter!
Marblez
2005-04-23
ch 2,
abusei like this so please write more
im no muggle
2005-04-23
ch 2, anon.
abuseaw poor sirius
iamtherealmaverick
2005-04-21
ch 2,
abuseCrazy!

I hope you'll write more soon!
Elizabeth Annette
2005-04-19
ch 2,
abuseYay! More yummy Sev-n-James scenes please!
Elayna Fournier
2005-04-17
ch 2,
abuseyay! you updated. i don't think i reviewed for the first chapter, but i liked it too. anyways, i love how you're developing this story and i'm hoping that you won't stop. awesome job!
Hopeakaarme
2005-04-17
ch 2,
abuseOkay, so Rem's not pregnant, then. Severus, then? Come on... It'd be so nice to see that happen! If he isn't preggers already.
So there are two reasons for Severus's niceness, eh? Let's see...
1) Sev's genetically modified himself,
2) He's preggers and gets all emotional about Sirius being tormented and stuff, (Yes! Please!)
3) He doesn't think anybody deserves what he's gone through,
or
4)You're just trying to cheat us and there's only one reason.
Dark Lardy of Griffindor
2005-04-17
ch 2,
abusereally good story
my friend says fine leave me then
update quickly
orlin
2005-04-17
ch 2,
abuseAww poor siri and poor sev and poor someone! oh well yeh anyway i though it was a great chapter and yay james/sev!! that's kool :D

and yay for remus for being there for siri hes very kool!

and i would write more but im half asleep :D
(even if it is only ten to six)
xx tubs
squiddie03
2005-04-17
ch 2,
abuseah! update! hurry! run! fly! TELEPORT! just update quickly!
Carwash007
2005-04-17
ch 2, anon.
abuseWow, great story, keep writing ! Audrey
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