 Brukaoru 2009-05-30 . chapter 13This story is awesome! I love how it's a lot of humor in the beginning but gets rather dark in later chapters, I think that balance is done well.
I do hope this is continued, it's too good to leave it unfinished! |
 KuroitsukiNoMai 2008-08-02 . chapter 13ok, so now im really curious 'bout kenshin's past (for this fic) ^.^ and is his wife dead (in this fic)? i mean, the way ya made kenshin describe sounds like she's dead... but kaoru kinda clueless ^.^ udpate soon!
*~tsukiko~* |
 Dudette Angel Rose 2008-07-25 . chapter 10plz i have read all the other chapters and have been waiting for years for you to continue it plz write more plz write more it is such a good story i really love it! it is my favourite kenshin story! |
 SnowCharms 2008-05-19 . chapter 13Sigh...this will be interesting...but i wonder who is d poor prince...i wonder if he is Kenshin...update! |
 2008-04-25 . chapter 12 I am up to chapter 13! Plz write more ! I really like this story! write write write write write! i have been waiting for a very long time! |
 lotus dreamer 2007-10-27 . chapter 13Cool story. Just tell me a bit more about kenshins wife. Iam a bit confused over kenshins feeling on this subject and how can he be attracted to kaoru and still not feel guilty. |
 Sakura Kaoru-Chan 2007-10-25 . chapter 13Hey that was good plz update |
 poems2songs 2007-09-12 . chapter 13interesting story... really like it... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you! |
 KiT72 2007-05-20 . chapter 13hi there!i really like your fic...its great!hehe...
anyway,,pakisagot naman po...hehe
1.How old is Kenshin??
2.What Kenshin's real personality and why wouldn't he admit that he's the bakery guy??
3.Where's Tomoe?
4.What's w/ Amakusa??
5.Where's Seta??
6.When will you update your stories?
can you please explain the auction thingie?yup,,that's all...hope you update soon!=) |
 Miharu Kawashi 2007-05-09 . chapter 13Interesting sotory. I hope you decide to update since it's been so long. I hope your muse hasn't completely died off. I would really like to read the end of this story. Ja ne! |
 Adelaide MacGregor 2007-02-16 . chapter 13Gah! Where's the rest? You have a good story going, a few missed words (I know how that is...your brain works faster than your fingers sometimes), and minor grammatical errors that could be fixed. The transitions and time laps could have been smoother, but you did a fairly good job with. The beginning of the story could have been condensed chapter wise-- you did a good job with everyone meeting, introducing the situation and such, but some of the chapters that were short could have been condensed. Also could have brought in the true plot--the auction in sooner. Good story though, and don't be offended, just constructive criticism. Good luck when you continue the story. |
 kitsune55 2007-02-14 . chapter 13I think that you kinda broke your promise there, hun, because you haven't updated in a long time. I hope that you haven't lost your inspiration with any of your other stories. *gives you valentine's chocolates* there, now update on all of your stories and you'll get the giraldelli chocolate that i have hidden for you. ^_^.
Your biggest fan,
~Kitsune55 |
 Wingless-Tenshi-Kawaii 2006-11-16 . chapter 13Hey great story.I wish you could updated.And I love your ironic story you please updated that one too when you wanted to updated your story next time? |
 Kaiju29 2006-10-15 . chapter 12Oh yeah...is Kaoru going to recognise Sanosuke?
Im looking forward to it!
Please...PLEASE update soon.
Your killing me here! |
 Kaiju29 2006-10-15 . chapter 13AH! I love this, and all of your stories so much!
*shudder* Shougo's sorta...to put it bluntly, freaky. Im looking forward to the revalations into his charicter that you will no doubt provide in the following chapies!
I get what you mean by exploring the characters, good or bad, more thuroughly. You cant just say "hes the bad guy" and not say why! I mean, there must be SOME reason why!?
Sorry...im one of those stupid and annoying people who belive that everyone has SOME good in them...no matter if its just a tiny speck right the way down in the sole of his boot...ITS STILL THERE!
Keep up the good word, Candy-sparkle-sama, your doing brilliantly!
Kaiju |